Avinaash/finalDPOChallengeNewTest4 · Datasets at Hugging Face

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When I got married, things quickly went from bad to worse because I had to work two shifts at home and the shop.	#When I got married, things quickly went from bad to worse because I had to work at two shifts, at home, and the shop.	#When I got married, things quickly went from bad to worse because I had to work at two shifts, at home, and the shop.	#When I got married, things quickly went from bad to worse because I had to work at two shifts, at home, and the shop.	6	6	6
As a matter of fact, Budapest, the capital city of Hungary, could be a very good competitor for hosting this sporting event.	# As a matter of fact, Budapest, the capital city of Hungary, can be a very good competitor for hosting this sporting event.	# As a matter of fact, Budapest, the capital city of Hungary, can be a very good competitor for hosting this sporting event.	# As a matter of fact, Budapest, the capital city of Hungary, can be a very good competitor for hosting this sporting event.	6	6	6
Buda Castle is an impressive ancient picturesque building and an attractive tourist location.	#Buda Castle is an impressive ancient picturesque building and attractive tourist location.	#Buda Castle is an impressive ancient picturesque building and attractive tourist location.	#Buda Castle is an impressive ancient picturesque building and attractive tourist location.	4	4	4
The admission tickets to most of Budapest's museums are comparatively cheap.	# admission tickets to the most of Budapest's museums are comparatively cheap.	The admission's tickets to the most of Budapest's museums are comparatively cheap.	# admission tickets to the most of Budapest's museums are comparatively cheap.	7	6	7
In addition, homeless people have to sleep in the street.	# In addition, homeless people have to sleep in the street.	The homeless people have to sleep in the street.	# In addition, homeless people have to sleep in the street.	2	12	2
I had just graduated from the Academy and was in my summer holidays.	#I had just graduated from the Academy and was on my summer holidays.	#I had just graduated from the Academy and was on my summer holidays.	#I had just graduated from the Academy and was on my summer holidays.	2	2	2
By that time, I had attended six interviews, but nobody was interested in my candidacy.	#By that time, I had visited six interviews, but nobody was interested in my candidacy.	#By that time, I had visited six interviews, but nobody was interested in my candidacy.	#By that time, I had visited six interviews, but nobody was interested in my candidacy.	7	7	7
I decided to go to my parents and spend a few weeks helping them with the renovation of their house.	#I decided to go to my parents and spend a few weeks helping them with the renovation of their house.	#I decided to go to my parents and spend a few weeks helping them with the renovation of their house.	#I decided to go to my parents and spend a few weeks helping them with the renovation of their house.	1	1	1
But then I remembered that when I was 15, I'd sent my scientific work to the Patent service.	#But then I remembered when I was 15, I've sent my scientific work to the Patent service.	#But then I remembered when I was 15, I've sent my scientific work to the Patent service.	#But then I remembered when I was 15, I've sent my scientific work to the Patent service.	8	8	8
In 50 years time, maybe not all of the natural resources will have been used up, but most of them then will have been exploited.	#50 years ago, maybe not all of the natural resources will have been used up, but most of them then will have been exploited.	# In 50 years' time, maybe not all of the natural resources will have been used up, but most of them then will have been exploited.	#50 years' time, maybe not all of the natural resources will have been used up, but most of them then will have been exploited.	7	3	4
So, is it really worth getting away from it all and setting off on a journey around the world or getting their first job?	#So, is it really worth it getting away from it all and setting off on a journey around the world or taking their first job?	#So, is it really worth it getting away from it all and setting off on a journey around the world or taking their first job?	#So, is it really worth it getting away from it all and setting off on a journey around the world or taking their first job?	8	8	8
Therefore, they choose a job that is related to a hobby or sport so that they can learn from it and earn money at the same time.	#Therefore, they choose a job that is related to a hobby or sport so that they can learn from and earn money at the same time.	#Therefore, they choose a job that is related to a hobby or sport so that they can learn from and earn money at the same time.	The reason why they choose a job that is related to a hobby or sport so that they can learn from and earn money at the same time.	4	4	11
I learned somewhere that the best thing to make a path through your writing is to start typing.	#I learned somewhere that the best thing to make a path through your writing is to start tipping.	#I learned somewhere that the best thing to make a path through your writing is to start tipping.	#I learned somewhere that the best thing to make a path through your writing is to start tipping.	3	3	3
As a result, they are easily attracted by the allure of wealth, which leads to illegal activities such as theft, kidnapping, or drug trafficking.	#As a result, they are easily drawn by the allure of wealth, which leads to illegal activities such as theft, kidnapping, or drug trafficking.	#As a result, they are easily drawn by the allure of wealth, which leads to illegal activities such as theft, kidnapping, or drug trafficking.	The result is that they are easily drawn by the allure of wealth, which leads to illegal activities such as theft, kidnapping, or drug trafficking.	8	8	19
In addition, the prevalence of media such as television or the internet is partially to blame.	# In addition, the prevalence of social media such as television or the internet is partially to blame.	# In addition, the prevalence of social media such as television or the internet is partially to blame.	# In addition, the prevalence of social media such as television or the internet is partially to blame.	9	9	9
In conclusion, although human nature is likely to be a cause of crime, I hold the position that crime occurs due to the media and poverty.	#In conclusion, although human nature is likely to be a cause of crime, I hold the position that crime occurs due to social media and poverty.	#In conclusion, although human nature is likely to be a cause of crime, I hold the position that crime occurs due to social media and poverty.	# In conclusion, although human nature is likely to be a cause of crime, I hold the position that crime occurs due to social media and poverty.	7	7	8
In the past, people used technology as a tool for making survival an easier endeavor.	# In the past, people used technology as a tool for making survival an easier endeavor.	# In the past, people used technology as a tool for making survival an easier endeavor.	# In the past, people used technology as a tool for making survival an easier endeavor.	2	2	2
Nowadays, we are witnessing a shift in the role technology is playing in our society and may continue to play for generations to come.	#Nowadays, we are witnessing a shift in the role technology is playing in our society and may continue to play for generations to come.	#Nowadays, we are witnessing a shift in the role technology is playing in our society and may continue to play for generations to come.	#Nowadays, we are witnessing a shift in the role technology is playing in our society and may continue to play for generations to come.	1	1	1
In the modern-day world, technology is no longer a tool for survival, but it has turned into a means of communication and entertainment.	# In the modern-day world, technology is no longer a tool for survival but it has turned into a means of communication and entertainment.	# In the modern-day world, technology is no longer a tool for survival but it has turned into a means of communication and entertainment.	# In the modern-day world technology is no longer a tool for survival but it has turned to a means of communication and entertainment.	3	3	6
Whenever you're in a coffee shop, standing at a bus stop, or taking the tube, you can easily see how people are connected to each other using different sorts of electronic devices.	#Whenever you're in a coffee shop, standing at a bus stop or taking the tube, you can easily see how people are connected to each other using different kinds of electronic devices.	#Whenever you're in a coffee shop, standing at a bus stop or taking the tube, you can easily see how people are connected to each other using different kinds of electronic devices.	The time you're in a coffee shop, standing at a bus stop or taking the tube, you can easily see how people are connected to each other using different kinds of electronic devices.	6	6	11
The primary concern regarding this new communication behavior is whether it makes face-to-face interaction and communication between people nonexistent.	#The primary concern regarding this new communication behavior is whether it made face-to-face interaction and communication between people nonexistent.	The primary concern regarding this new communication behavior is whether it made face-to-face interaction and communication between people nonexistent.	#The primary concern regarding this new communication behavior is whether it made face-to-face interaction and communication between people nonexistent.	3	2	3
This leads, among other things, to the possibility of people to be lonely, as having too many virtual friendships causes an inability to establish meaningful relationships.	#This leads, among other things, to the ability for people to be lonely, as having too many virtual friendships causes the inability to establish meaningful relationships.	#This leads, among other things, to the ability for people to be lonely, as having too many virtual friendships causes the inability to establish meaningful relationships.	# This leads, among other things, to the ability for people to be lonely, as having too many virtual friendships causes the inability to establish meaningful relationships.	11	11	12
The young generation in our society is participating in a massive, unintentional social experiment, the results of which are not entirely predictable.	# Young generations in our society are participating in a massive, unintentional social experiment, the results of which are not entirely predictable.	The young generations in our society are participating in a massive, unintentional social experiment, the results of which are not entirely predictable.	# Young generations in our society are participating in a massive, unintentional social experiment, the results of which are not entirely predictable.	8	4	8
Nowadays, society tends to prejudge others just because of their actions and without knowing the real motive of their behavior.	#Nowadays, society tends to prejudge others just because of their actions and without knowing the real motive of the behavior.	#Nowadays, society tends to prejudge others just because of their actions and without knowing the real motive of the behavior.	#Nowadays, society tends to prejudge others just because of their actions, and without knowing the real motive of the behavior.	3	3	4
But with Colton's quotation, we can clearly see that it has happened for years.	#But with Colton's quotation, we can clearly see that it has happened since years.	#But with Colton's quotation, we can clearly see that it has happened since years.	#But with Colton's quotation, we can clearly see that it has happened since years.	6	6	6
In our current society, we can see it daily.	# In our current society, we can see it daily.	# In our current society, we can see it daily.	# In our current society, we can see it daily.	2	2	2
When getting these jobs is not through civil service exams, I think there are only two ways: influence or flattery. And to be honest, I don't know what I prefer.	When acceding to these jobs is not through civil service exams, I think there are only two ways: influences or flattery; and to be honest, I don't know what I prefer.	When acceding to these jobs is not through civil service exams, I think there are only two ways: influences or flattery; and to be honest, I don't know what I prefer.	When acceding to these jobs is not through civil service exams, I think there are only two ways: influences or flattery; and to be honest, I don't know what I prefer.	11	11	11
To sum up, I would like to invite people who agree with the quotation to rethink their opinion because everything is not what it seems to be.	#To sum up, I would like to invite people who agree with the quotation, to rethink their opinion because everything is not what it seems to be.	#To sum up, I would like to invite people who agree with the quotation, to rethink their opinion because everything is not what it seems to be.	#To sum up, I would like to invite people who agree with the quotation, to rethink their opinion because everything is not what it seems to be.	2	2	2
A way that no one ever seems to tell you about.	#A way that no one ever seems to tell you about.	The way that no one ever seems to tell you about.	#A way that no one ever seems to tell you about.	1	3	1
I am really interested in martial arts, such as Aikido, Judo, and self-defense, which I have already practiced.	#I am really interested in martial arts, such as Aikido, Judo, and self-defense that I have already practiced.	#I am really interested in martial arts, such as Aikido, Judo, and self-defense that I have already practiced.	#I am really interested in martial arts, such as Aikido, Judo, and self-defense that I have already practiced.	6	6	6
There are some that do not need too much energy and strength, such as Thai chi, and others that need more, like Karate, Judo, and so.	# There are some that do not need too much forces and strengths, such as Thai chi and others that need more like Karate, Judo, and so.	# There are some that do not need too much forces and strengths, such as Thai chi and others that need more like Karate, Judo, and so.	# There are some that do not need too much forces and strengths, such as Thai chi and others that need more like Karate, Judo, and so.	11	11	11
The first advantage of martial arts is to improve self-confidence.	#The First advantage of martial arts is to improve self-confidence.	The First advantage of martial arts is to improve self-confidence.	# The First advantage of martial arts is to improve self-confidence.	2	1	3
The second advantage of doing martial arts is that you learn how to respect others.	# Second advantage of doing martial arts is how to respect others.	The second advantage of doing martial arts is how to respect others.	# Second advantage of doing martial arts is how to respect others.	19	15	19
The wonderland that is described in the book is created through logic games, and, therefore, the success it has achieved in the most varied environments is understandable.	#The wonderland that is described in the book is created through logic games, and, therefore, it is understandable the success it has achieved in the most varied environments.	The wonderland that is described in the book is created through logic games, and, therefore, it is understandable the success it has achieved in the most varied environments.	# The wonderland that is described in the book is created through logic games, and, therefore, it is understandable the success it has achieved in the most varied environments.	40	39	41
The exceptional play that we saw yesterday features all the iconic characters adapted to some extent to the present time, such as the White Rabbit, the Mad Hatter, the blue caterpillar, and the Queen of Hearts.	The exceptional play that we saw yesterday features all the iconic characters adapted to some extent adapted to the present time, such as, the White Rabbit, Mad Hatter, the blue caterpillar, or the Queen of Hearts.	The exceptional play that we saw yesterday features all the iconic characters adapted to some extent adapted to the present time, such as, the White Rabbit, Mad Hatter, the blue caterpillar, or the Queen of Hearts.	The exceptional play that we saw yesterday features all the iconic characters adapted to some extent, adapted to the present time, such as, the White Rabbit, Mad Hatter, the blue caterpillar, or the Queen of Hearts.	16	16	17
The only negative comment I could make is that you do not have the possibility to use your imagination in the same way as when you read the book.	#The only negative comment I could make is that you do not have the possibility to let your imagination in the same way that when you read the book.	The only negative comment I could make is that you do not have the possibility to let your imagination in the same way as when you read the book.	#The only negative comment I could make is that you do not have the possibility to let your imagination in the same way as when you read the book.	7	3	4
However, I strongly recommend going to see this play because it has great appeal for both adults and children.	#However, I strongly recommend going to see this play because it has a great appeal to both adults and children.	#However, I strongly recommend going to see this play because it has a great appeal to both adults and children.	The fact is, I strongly recommend going to see this play because it has a great appeal to both adults and children.	5	5	15
This lesson was the third trial of giving students written instructions and having them explain to their classmates what activities needed to be done.	#This lesson was the third trail of giving students written instructions and having them explain to the classmates what activities need to be done.	The lesson was the third trail of giving students written instructions and having them explain to the classmates what activities need to be done.	#This lesson was the third trail of giving students written instructions and having them explain to the classmates what activities need to be done.	7	8	7
This time, in order to further reduce my TTT, I handed over the correction of activities to the students as well.	#This time in order to further reduce my TTT, I handed over the correction of activities to the students as well.	#This time in order to further reduce my TTT, I handed over the correction of activities to the students as well.	# This time, in order to further reduce my TTT, I handed over the correction of activities to the students as well.	2	2	2
The amount of talking done by the students was more than pleasing.	#The amount of talking done by the students was more than pleasing.	The amount of talking done by the students was more than pleasing.	#The amount of talking done by the students was more than pleasing.	1	0	1
I had an exact copy of what the students had on their clue cards on a separate piece of paper this time rather than in the lesson plan itself.	#I had an exact copy of what the students had on their clue cards on a separate piece of paper this time rather than in the lesson plan its self.	#I had an exact copy of what the students had on their clue cards on a separate piece of paper this time rather than in the lesson plan its self.	# I had an exact copy of what the students had on their clue cards on a separate piece of paper this time rather than in the lesson plan its self.	3	3	4
I highlighted anything that required action from me on my copy of the clues, e.g., handing a student the answers to an exercise.	# I highlighted anything that required an action from me on my copy of the clues e.g. handing a student the answers to an exercise.	# I highlighted anything that required an action from me on my copy of the clues e.g. handing a student the answers to an exercise.	# I highlighted anything that required an action from me on my copy of the clues e.g., handing a student the answers to an exercise.	7	7	6
In hindsight, giving this much control to the class and introducing a new and tricky grammar point (past modals) was not the best choice.	# In heinz sight, giving this much control to the class and introducing a new and tricky grammar point (past modals) was not the best choice.	# In heinz sight, giving this much control to the class and introducing a new and tricky grammar point (past modals) was not the best choice.	# In heinz sight, giving this much control to the class and introducing a new and tricky grammar point (past modals) was not the best choice.	5	5	5
Despite having timing issues, I feel that, thus far, this was the class with the most natural student participation and the lowest amount of TTT.	#Despite having timing issues, I feel that this class has been the class with the most natural student participation and the lowest amount of TTT.	#Despite having timing issues, I feel that, thus far, this was the class with the most natural student participation and the lowest amount of TTT.	# Despite having timing issues, I feel that thus far this was the class with the most natural student participation and the lowest amount of TTT.	13	1	4
I thoroughly enjoyed the lesson and according to student feedback, so did they.	#I throughly enjoyed the lesson, and according to student feedback, so did they.	#I throughly enjoyed the lesson, and according to student feedback, so did they.	#I throughly enjoyed the lesson, and according to student feedback, so did they.	3	3	3
It's a city where you can recreate a part of European history, thanks to the ancient and magnificent buildings, and where you can enjoy the latest technology and have fun.	# It's a city where you can recreate part of the European history thanks to the ancient and magnificent buildings, and where you can enjoy the last technologies and have fun.	The city where you can recreate a part of the European history thanks to the ancient and magnificent building, and where you can enjoy the last technologies and have fun.	# It's a city where you can recreate part of the European history thanks to the ancient and magnificent buildings, and where you can enjoy the last technologies and have fun.	14	17	14
Despite people's opinions, if you have the opportunity to go, don't throw it away and check it out for yourself.	#Despite the people's opinions, if you have the opportunity to go, don't throw it away, and check it for yourself.	#Despite the people's opinions, if you have the opportunity to go, don't throw it away, and check it for yourself.	#Despite the people's opinions, if you have the opportunity to go, don't throw it away, and check it for yourself.	10	10	10
As the saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed."	#As the saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed."	#As the saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed."	#As the saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed."	1	1	1
If you respect your friends, then they will respect you.	# If you respect your friends, then they will respect you.	# If you respect your friends, then they will respect you.	# If you respect your friends, then they will respect you.	2	2	2
I didn't know what was happening and why they were acting like that.	#I didn't know was happening, and why they were acting like that.	#I didn't know it was happening, and why they were acting like that.	#I didn't know it was happening, and why they were acting like that.	7	5	5
When I looked in the mirror, my face was spotted with red spots, and it kind of turned purple; when I looked at my hands and my arms, they were all red from my fingers when I was scratching them, and the parts that weren't red, they were spotted like my face.	When I looked at the mirror, my face was spotted with red spots, and it kind of turned purple when I looked at my hands and my arms, it was all red from my fingers when I was scratching them, and the parts that weren't red, they were spotted like my face.	When I looked at the mirror, my face was spotted with red spots, and it kind of turned purple when I looked at my hands and my arms, it was all red from my fingers when I was scratching them, and the parts that weren't red, they were spotted like my face.	When I looked at the mirror, my face was spotted with red spots, and it kind of turned purple when I looked at my hands and my arms, it was all red from my fingers when I was scratching them, and the parts that weren't red, they were spotted like my face.	10	10	10
On the one hand, I have been learning English for so long that my good proficiency has given me a chance to get a position in an international team.	# On the one hand, I have been learning English for so long that my good profeciency has given me the chance to get a position in an international work team.	# On the one hand, I have been learning English for so long that my good profeciency has given me the chance to get a position in an international work team.	# On the one hand, I have been learning English for so long that my good proficiency has given me the chance to get a position in an international work team.	11	11	10
On the other hand, I have learned French and Spanish just for a few months because I was curious to learn the official language of the countries where friends and relatives are living.	# On the other hand, I have learned French and Spanish just for a few months because I was curious to learn the language of the countries where friends and relatives are living.	# On the other hand, I have learned French and Spanish just for a few months because I was curious to learn the language of the countries where friends and relatives are living in.	#On the other hand, I have learned French and Spanish just for a few months because I was curious to learn the language of the countries where friends and relatives are living.	11	14	10
I am only able to read simple worksheets and make a brief presentation about myself.	#I am only able to read simple worksheets and make a brief presentation about me.	#I am only able to read simple worksheets and to make a brief presentation about me.	#I am only able to read simple worksheets and make a brief presentation about me.	5	8	5
As a student of these classes, especially in English, I realized that, although the classes were important, systematic language practice was essential for reaching an advanced level and, moreover, for maintaining it.	The students of these classes, especially, of English, realized that, although the classes were important, a systematic language practice was essential for reaching an advanced level and, moreover, for maintaining it.	#As a student of these classes, especially, of English, I realized that although the classes were important, a systematic language practice was essential for reaching an advanced level and, moreover, for maintaining it.	The students of these classes, especially, of English, realized that, although the classes were important, a systematic language practice was essential for reaching an advanced level and, moreover, for maintaining it.	12	7	12
Government authorities told people to stay calm, and a curfew was established, but Peter was on a camping holiday with his best friends and only heard this when they met another group of people who, fortunately, had a radio.	The government authorities told people to stay calm and a curfew was established, but Peter was on the camping holiday with his best friends and only heard this when they met another group of people that, fortunately, had a radio.	The government authorities told people to stay calm and a curfew was established, but Peter was on the camping holiday with his best friends and only heard this when they met another group of people that, fortunately, had a radio.	The government authorities told people to stay calm and a curfew was established, but Peter was on the camping holiday with his best friends and only heard this when they met another group of people that, fortunately, had a radio.	12	12	12
In order to be stronger in number, they befriended those people, and they helped each other.	# In order to be stronger in numbers, they befriended those people and helped each other.	# In order to be stronger in numbers, they befriended those people and helped each other.	# In order to be stronger in numbers, they befriended those people and helped each other.	9	9	9
The new group worked very well together, but there was this girl he just couldn't stand at all.	#The new group worked very well together, but there was this girl he just couldn't stand at all.	The new group worked very well together, but there was this girl he just couldn't stand at all.	# The new group worked very well together, but there was this girl he just couldn't stand at all.	1	0	2
"It's the end of the world, and I have to spend it with you?" he whispered. The night had already fallen, and they didn't want any unwanted visitors.	#"It's the end of the world, and I have to spend it with you? He whispered, the night had already fallen, and they didn't want any unwanted visitors.	The end of the world, and I have to spend it with you? He whispered, the night had already fallen, and they didn't want any unwanted visitors.	# "It's the end of the world, and I have to spend it with you? He whispered, the night had already fallen, and they didn't want any unwanted visitors.	5	11	6
I'm also very good at first aid, so if someone is hurt, I'm very helpful with that too. I can do pretty much anything that you want me to. I love all kids, and I love spending time with them; I love playing outside and caring for all the children.	#I'm also very good at first aid, so if someone is hurt, I'm very helpful with that too, I can do pretty much anything that you want me to do, I love all kids, and I love spending time with them. I love playing outside and caring for all the children.	#I'm also very good at first aid, so if someone is hurt, I'm very helpful with that too, I can do pretty much anything that you want me to do, I love all kids, and I love spending time with them. I love playing outside and caring for all the children.	#I'm also very good at first aid, so if someone is hurt, I'm very helpful with that too, I can do pretty much anything that you want me to do, I love all the kids and I love spending time with them, I love playing outside and caring for all the children.	7	7	12
Overall, I just love children.	#overall, I just love children.	#overall, I just love children.	#overall, I just love children.	2	2	2
At the moment, I am struggling with the translation of my CV.	#At the moment, I am struggling with the translation of my CV.	#At the moment, I am struggling with the translation of my CV.	#At the moment I am struggling with the translation of my CV.	1	1	2
I have just found cheap accommodation in a hostel, which is very convenient for all the facilities.	#I have just found a cheap accommodation in a hostel, which is very convenient to all the facilities.	#I have just found a cheap accommodation in a hostel, which is very convenient to all the facilities.	#I have just found a cheap accommodation in a hostel, which is very convenient to all the facilities.	5	5	5
Even though I am shy and I like my privacy, I think that during this experience, it will be better to have contact with foreign people to practice my spoken English as much as possible.	#Even though I am shy, I like my privacy, and I think that during this experience, it will be better to have contacts with foreign people to practice my spoken English as much as possible.	#Even though I am shy, I like my privacy, and I think that during this experience, it will be better to have contacts with foreign people to practice my spoken English as much as possible.	#Even though I am shy, I like my privacy, and I think that during this experience, it will be better to have contacts with foreign people to practice my spoken English as much as possible.	10	10	10
Now, let's talk about the good things.	#Now let's talk about the good things.	#Now let's talk about the good things.	#Now let's talk about the good things.	2	2	2
The aim of this experience is also to have fun and a great time with you.	#The aim of this experience is also having fun and great time with you.	The aim of this experience is also to have fun and have great time with you.	The aim of this experience is also having fun and having great time with you.	9	3	11
For example, what about going for some walks in the countryside or renting a bike?	# For example, what about going for some walks in the countryside or renting a bike?	# For example, what about going for some walks in the countryside or renting a bike?	# For example, what about going for some walks across the countryside or renting a bike?	2	2	8
I think it's so effective: having a long walk in the green hills that surround my town, breathing deeply, enjoying the perfume of nature and the wonderful sights and colors of flowers and trees, it's the best way for me to clear my mind.	#I think it's so effective: having a long walk on the green hills that surround my town, breathing deeply, enjoying the perfume of nature and the wonderful sights and colors of flowers and trees, it's the best for me to clear my mind.	#I think it's so effective: having a long walk in the green hills that surround my town, breathing deeply, enjoying the perfume of nature and the wonderful sights and colors of flowers and trees, it's the best for me to clear my mind.	# I think it's so effective: having a long walk on the green hills that surround my town, breathing deeply, enjoying the perfume of nature, and the wonderful sights and colors of flowers and trees, it's the best for me to clear my mind.	6	5	8
There's no special advice to give to somebody who wants to start this activity: if you aim to do something good for your health and for your mind, just wear comfortable clothes, put a pair of trainers on, choose the most inspiring place and just go and enjoy every minute of it.	There's no special advice to give to somebody who wants to start this activity: if you aim to do something good for your health and for your mind, just wear comfortable clothes, put your pair of trainers on, choose the most inspiring place, and just go and enjoy any minute of it.	There's no special advice to give to somebody who wants to start this activity: if you aim to do something good for your health and for your mind, just wear comfortable clothes, put your pair of trainers on, choose the most inspiring place, and just go and enjoy any minute of it.	There's no special advice to give to somebody who wants to start this activity: if you aim to do something good for your health and your mind, just wear comfortable clothes, put your pair of trainers on, choose the most inspiring place, and just go and enjoy any minute of it.	9	9	13
I would recommend 30 mins per day to get the most out of this activity: it doesn't take up too much of your spare time, and you'll get great benefits from it.	#30 min per day, to get the most of this activity: it doesn't take too much of your spare time, and you'll get great benefits from it.	#30 min per day, to get the most of this activity: it doesn't take too much of your spare time, and you'll get great benefits from it.	# I would recommend 30 minutes per day to get the most of this activity: it doesn't take too much of your spare time, and you'll get great benefits from it.	27	27	12
It's very cheap as well: apart from your jumpsuit and a pair of comfortable trainers, it doesn't require any extra cost for technical or sophisticated equipment.	# It's very cheap as well: except for your jumpsuit and a pair of comfortable trainers, it doesn't require any extra cost for technical or sophisticated equipment.	# It's very cheap as well: except for your jumpsuit and a pair of comfortable trainers, it doesn't require any extra cost for technical or sophisticated equipment.	# It's very cheap as well: except for your jumpsuit and a pair of comfortable trainers, it doesn't require any extra cost for technical or sophisticated equipment.	9	9	9
I think this will be a very good experience for you because you can learn about another culture and other people's way of thinking.	#I think this is a very good experience to you because you can learn about another culture and people's way of thinking.	#I think this is a very good experience to you because you can learn about another culture and people's way of thinking.	#I think this is a very good experience to you because you can learn about another culture and people's way of thinking.	15	15	15
So, I suggest you try to get a working holiday visa for Korea.	#So, I suggest you try to get a working holiday visa of Korea.	#So, I suggest you try to get a working holiday visa of Korea.	The so, I suggest you try to get a working holiday visa of Korea.	3	3	7
As you know, if you have a normal tourism visa, you can't work.	#As you know, if you have a normal tourist visa, you can't work.	#As you know, if you have a normal tourist visa, you can't work.	#As you know, if you have a normal tourist visa, you can't work.	2	2	2
If you get the internship, you can work as a real businessman.	# If you get the internship, you can work as a real businessman.	# If you get the internship, you can work as a real businessman.	# If you get the internship, you can work as a real businessman.	2	2	2
In summer, you can enjoy many activities on the beach, and you can also go hiking.	#In summer, you can enjoy many activities on the beach and also you can go hiking.	#In summer, you can enjoy many activities on the beach and also you can go hiking.	# In summer, you can enjoy many activities on the beach and also you can go hiking.	12	12	13
It is the most popular place that people want to go to.	# It is the most popular place that people want to go to.	# It is the most popular place that people want to go to.	#It is the most popular place that people want to go to.	2	2	1
Not only was it going to change my life but also another person's life.	#Not only was it going to change my life, but also other people's lives.	#Not only was it going to change my life, but also other people's lives.	#Not only was it going to change my life, but also other people's lives.	10	10	10
When we arrived at the police station, I met an officer called Michael.	# When we arrived at the police office, I met an officer called Michael.	# When we arrived at the police office, I met an officer called Michael.	# When we arrived at the police office, I met an officer called Michael.	8	8	8
With over two hundred thousand dollars in his bag, he was a giant walking target.	# With over two hundred thousand dollars in his bag, he was a giant walking target.	# With over two hundred thousand dollars in his bag, he was a giant walking target.	#With over two hundred thousand dollars in his bag, he was a giant walking target.	2	2	1
A police officer's car was zooming in his direction, sirens blaring.	#A police officer car was zooming in his direction, sirens blaring.	#A police officer's car was zooming in his direction, sirens blaring.	#A police officer's car was zooming in his direction, sirens blaring.	3	1	1
But, on the other hand, when they travel abroad, it's easier to take a train or a plane because you arrive faster and you needn't find a place to park your car and, if you want to go somewhere, you can take a taxi or a bus or even the underground.	#But, on the other hand, when they travel abroad, it's easier to take a train or a plane because you arrive faster and you needn't find a place to park your car and if you want to go somewhere, you can take a taxi or a bus or even the underground.	#But, on the other hand, when they travel abroad, it's easier to take a train or a plane because you arrive faster and you needn't find a place to park your car and if you want to go somewhere, you can take a taxi or a bus or even the underground.	# But, on the other hand, when they travel abroad, it's easier to take a train o a plane because you arrive faster and you needn't find a place to park your car, and if you want to go somewhere, you can take a taxi or a bus or even the underground.	2	2	5
Anyway, I don't think public transport has a future, but public transport is used on different occasions than before, and when you go to a place you know you won't be able to find a place to park, and you can't waste time looking for where to park.	#Anyway, I don't think public transport has no future, but public transport is used on different occasions from before and when you go to a place you know you won't be able to find a place to park, and you can't waste time looking for where to park.	#Anyway, I don't think public transport has no future, but public transport is used on different occasions from before and when you go to a place you know you won't be able to find a place to park, and you can't waste time looking for where to park.	#Anyway, I don't think public transport has no future, but public transport is used on different occasions from before and when you go to a place you know you won't be able to find a place to park, and you can't waste time looking for where to park.	8	8	8
To make bank notes, the first step is to design them properly.	# To make bank notes, the first step is to design them properly.	# To make bank notes, the first step is to properly design them.	# To make bank notes, the first step is to design them properly.	2	20	2
Also, a special ink is printed on both sides of the sheet, and the images are slightly raised.	# Also, special ink is printed on both sides of the sheet and the images are slightly raised.	# Also, special ink is printed on both sides of the sheet and the images are slightly raised.	# Also, special ink is printed on both sides of the sheet, and the images are slightly raised.	5	5	4
Sheets in the second group then get separated into good ones, which, together with good quality sheets, enter a process of packaging and distribution where separate notes are cut and finally enter the market, and bad ones, which go to disposal with bad quality sheets, where both groups get securely destroyed.	#Sheets in the second groups then get separated into good ones, which, together with good quality sheets, enter a process of packaging and distribution where seperate notes are cut and finally enter the market, and bad ones, which go to disposal with bad quality sheets, where both groups get securely destroyed.	The sheets in the second groups then get separated into good ones, which, together with good quality sheets, enter a process of packaging and distribution where seperate notes are cut and finally enter the market, and bad ones, which go to disposal with bad quality sheets, where both groups get securely destroyed.	The sheets in the second groups then get separated into good ones, which, together with good quality sheets, enter the process of packaging and distribution where the sheets are cut and finally enter the market, and bad ones, which go to disposal with bad quality sheets, where both groups get securely destroyed.	3	7	20
My boyfriend is the best in the entire round world.	#My boyfriend is the best in all the entire world.	#My boyfriend is the best in all the entire world.	#My boyfriend is the best in all the whole world.	11	11	13
I met him two years ago at a party, and since that day, my life has changed in many different ways.	#I met him two years ago in a party, and since that day, my life has changed in many different ways.	#I met him two years ago in a party, and since that day, my life has changed in many different ways.	#I met him two years ago in a party, and since that day, my life has changed in many different ways.	3	3	3
When I first saw him, I never imagined that I would love that stranger this way.	#When I first saw him, I never imagined that I would love that stranger this way.	The first time I saw him, I never imagined that I would love that stranger this way.	#When I first saw him, I never imagined that I would love that stranger this way.	1	11	1
As a secret, I can tell you that I want to marry him so badly; I swear to god that my life would be much better if I could live all of it with him.	#As a secret, I can tell you that I want to marry him so badly, I swear to god that my life would be much better if I could live all of it with him.	#As a secret, I can tell you that I want to marry him so badly, I swear to god that my life would be much better if I could live all of it with him.	#As a secret, I can tell you that I want to marry him, so badly, I swear to god that my life would be much better if I could live all of it with him.	2	2	3
"It's time for us to shine," His handwritten words came to life in her mind.	# "It's time for us to shine," His handwritten words come to life in her mind.	# "It's time for us to shine," His handwritten words come to life in her mind.	# "It's time for us to shine," His handwritten words come to life in her mind.	3	3	3
She could distinctly hear his low, manly voice in her head.	#She could distinctly hear his low, manly voice in her head.	#She could distinctly hear his low, manly voice in her head.	# She could distinctly hear his low, manly voice in her head.	1	1	2
The person was holding her wrist, preventing her from wiping any sweat from her face.	#The person was holding her wrist, preventing her from wiping any sweat on her face.	The person was holding her wrist, preventing her from wiping any sweat on her face.	# The person was holding her wrist, preventing her from wiping any sweat on her face.	4	3	5
Those blue eyes were much darker with insecurity, doubt, and mystery.	# This blue eyes, were much darker with insecurity, doubt, and mystery.	The blue eyes were much darker with insecurity, doubt, and mystery.	# This blue eyes, were much darker with insecurity, doubt, and mystery.	5	2	5
I have them because I have paid for them, not for any other particular reason.	#I have them because I have paid for them, not for other reasons.	#I have them because I have paid for them, not for other particular reasons.	#I have them because I have paid for them, not for other reasons.	17	6	17
You will find me to be a reliable person who has a professional, calm, and honest approach to all work-related matters.	# You will find me to be a reliable person who has a professional, calm, and honest approach to all work-related matters.	# You will find me to be a reliable person who has a professional, calm, and honest approach to all work-related matters.	#1: You will find me to be a reliable person who has a professional, calm, and honest approach to all work related matters.	2	2	5
Additionally, I would also like to point out some of my personal qualities and values that I believe are extremely important in this profession, such as very high motivation to learn and educate more in this field, great responsibility, and reliability. Furthermore, I am also very dedicated to achieving any planned results and goals as well as having well-developed communication skills, etc.	Additionally, I would like to point out some of my personal qualities and values and I believe that these are extremely important in this profession such as very high motivation to learn and educate in this field more, great responsibility and reliability, furthermore, I am also very dedicated to achieving any planned results and goals as well as possessing well developed communication skills etc.	Additionally, I would like also to point out some of my personal qualities and values, and I believe that these are extremely important in this profession such as very high motivation to learn and educate in this field more, great responsibility and reliability, furthermore, I am also very dedicated to achieving any planned results and goals as well as possessing well developed communication skills etc.	Additionally, I would like to also point out some of my personal qualities and values and I believe that are extremely important in this profession, such as very high motivation to learn and educate in this field more, great responsibility and reliability, furthermore, I am also very dedicated to achieving any planned results and goals as well as possessing well developed communication skills etc.	43	47	41
Given my related experience and excellent abilities, I would appreciate your consideration for any available or appropriate position according to my education and skills.	# Given my related experience and excellent capabilities, I would appreciate your consideration for any available or appropriate position according to my education and skills.	# Given my related experience and excellent capabilities, I would appreciate your consideration for any available or appropriate position according to my education and skills.	# Given my related experience and excellent capabilities, I would appreciate your consideration for any available or appropriate position according to my education and skills.	5	5	5
My CV, which is enclosed, includes additional information on my experience and skills.	# My CV, which is enclosed, contains additional information on my experience and skills.	The CV, which is enclosed, contains additional information on my experience and skills.	#My CV, which is enclosed, contains additional information about my experience and skills.	9	10	12
We'd better do our exam as soon as we can. "	# We better do our exam as soon as we can.	The better we do our exam, as soon as we can, "	#We better do our exam as soon as we can.	6	9	5

When I got married, things quickly went from bad to worse because I had to work two shifts at home and the shop.

#When I got married, things quickly went from bad to worse because I had to work at two shifts, at home, and the shop.

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As a matter of fact, Budapest, the capital city of Hungary, could be a very good competitor for hosting this sporting event.

# As a matter of fact, Budapest, the capital city of Hungary, can be a very good competitor for hosting this sporting event.

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Buda Castle is an impressive ancient picturesque building and an attractive tourist location.

#Buda Castle is an impressive ancient picturesque building and attractive tourist location.

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The admission tickets to most of Budapest's museums are comparatively cheap.

# admission tickets to the most of Budapest's museums are comparatively cheap.

The admission's tickets to the most of Budapest's museums are comparatively cheap.

# admission tickets to the most of Budapest's museums are comparatively cheap.

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In addition, homeless people have to sleep in the street.

# In addition, homeless people have to sleep in the street.

The homeless people have to sleep in the street.

# In addition, homeless people have to sleep in the street.

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I had just graduated from the Academy and was in my summer holidays.

#I had just graduated from the Academy and was on my summer holidays.

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By that time, I had attended six interviews, but nobody was interested in my candidacy.

#By that time, I had visited six interviews, but nobody was interested in my candidacy.

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I decided to go to my parents and spend a few weeks helping them with the renovation of their house.

#I decided to go to my parents and spend a few weeks helping them with the renovation of their house.

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But then I remembered that when I was 15, I'd sent my scientific work to the Patent service.

#But then I remembered when I was 15, I've sent my scientific work to the Patent service.

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In 50 years time, maybe not all of the natural resources will have been used up, but most of them then will have been exploited.

#50 years ago, maybe not all of the natural resources will have been used up, but most of them then will have been exploited.

# In 50 years' time, maybe not all of the natural resources will have been used up, but most of them then will have been exploited.

#50 years' time, maybe not all of the natural resources will have been used up, but most of them then will have been exploited.

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So, is it really worth getting away from it all and setting off on a journey around the world or getting their first job?

#So, is it really worth it getting away from it all and setting off on a journey around the world or taking their first job?

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Therefore, they choose a job that is related to a hobby or sport so that they can learn from it and earn money at the same time.

#Therefore, they choose a job that is related to a hobby or sport so that they can learn from and earn money at the same time.

The reason why they choose a job that is related to a hobby or sport so that they can learn from and earn money at the same time.

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I learned somewhere that the best thing to make a path through your writing is to start typing.

#I learned somewhere that the best thing to make a path through your writing is to start tipping.

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As a result, they are easily attracted by the allure of wealth, which leads to illegal activities such as theft, kidnapping, or drug trafficking.

#As a result, they are easily drawn by the allure of wealth, which leads to illegal activities such as theft, kidnapping, or drug trafficking.

The result is that they are easily drawn by the allure of wealth, which leads to illegal activities such as theft, kidnapping, or drug trafficking.

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In addition, the prevalence of media such as television or the internet is partially to blame.

# In addition, the prevalence of social media such as television or the internet is partially to blame.

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In conclusion, although human nature is likely to be a cause of crime, I hold the position that crime occurs due to the media and poverty.

#In conclusion, although human nature is likely to be a cause of crime, I hold the position that crime occurs due to social media and poverty.

# In conclusion, although human nature is likely to be a cause of crime, I hold the position that crime occurs due to social media and poverty.

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In the past, people used technology as a tool for making survival an easier endeavor.

# In the past, people used technology as a tool for making survival an easier endeavor.

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Nowadays, we are witnessing a shift in the role technology is playing in our society and may continue to play for generations to come.

#Nowadays, we are witnessing a shift in the role technology is playing in our society and may continue to play for generations to come.

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In the modern-day world, technology is no longer a tool for survival, but it has turned into a means of communication and entertainment.

# In the modern-day world, technology is no longer a tool for survival but it has turned into a means of communication and entertainment.

# In the modern-day world technology is no longer a tool for survival but it has turned to a means of communication and entertainment.

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Whenever you're in a coffee shop, standing at a bus stop, or taking the tube, you can easily see how people are connected to each other using different sorts of electronic devices.

#Whenever you're in a coffee shop, standing at a bus stop or taking the tube, you can easily see how people are connected to each other using different kinds of electronic devices.

The time you're in a coffee shop, standing at a bus stop or taking the tube, you can easily see how people are connected to each other using different kinds of electronic devices.

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The primary concern regarding this new communication behavior is whether it makes face-to-face interaction and communication between people nonexistent.

#The primary concern regarding this new communication behavior is whether it made face-to-face interaction and communication between people nonexistent.

The primary concern regarding this new communication behavior is whether it made face-to-face interaction and communication between people nonexistent.

#The primary concern regarding this new communication behavior is whether it made face-to-face interaction and communication between people nonexistent.

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This leads, among other things, to the possibility of people to be lonely, as having too many virtual friendships causes an inability to establish meaningful relationships.

#This leads, among other things, to the ability for people to be lonely, as having too many virtual friendships causes the inability to establish meaningful relationships.

# This leads, among other things, to the ability for people to be lonely, as having too many virtual friendships causes the inability to establish meaningful relationships.

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The young generation in our society is participating in a massive, unintentional social experiment, the results of which are not entirely predictable.

# Young generations in our society are participating in a massive, unintentional social experiment, the results of which are not entirely predictable.

The young generations in our society are participating in a massive, unintentional social experiment, the results of which are not entirely predictable.

# Young generations in our society are participating in a massive, unintentional social experiment, the results of which are not entirely predictable.

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Nowadays, society tends to prejudge others just because of their actions and without knowing the real motive of their behavior.

#Nowadays, society tends to prejudge others just because of their actions and without knowing the real motive of the behavior.

#Nowadays, society tends to prejudge others just because of their actions, and without knowing the real motive of the behavior.

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But with Colton's quotation, we can clearly see that it has happened for years.

#But with Colton's quotation, we can clearly see that it has happened since years.

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In our current society, we can see it daily.

# In our current society, we can see it daily.

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When getting these jobs is not through civil service exams, I think there are only two ways: influence or flattery. And to be honest, I don't know what I prefer.

When acceding to these jobs is not through civil service exams, I think there are only two ways: influences or flattery; and to be honest, I don't know what I prefer.

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To sum up, I would like to invite people who agree with the quotation to rethink their opinion because everything is not what it seems to be.

#To sum up, I would like to invite people who agree with the quotation, to rethink their opinion because everything is not what it seems to be.

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A way that no one ever seems to tell you about.

#A way that no one ever seems to tell you about.

The way that no one ever seems to tell you about.

#A way that no one ever seems to tell you about.

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I am really interested in martial arts, such as Aikido, Judo, and self-defense, which I have already practiced.

#I am really interested in martial arts, such as Aikido, Judo, and self-defense that I have already practiced.

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There are some that do not need too much energy and strength, such as Thai chi, and others that need more, like Karate, Judo, and so.

# There are some that do not need too much forces and strengths, such as Thai chi and others that need more like Karate, Judo, and so.

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The first advantage of martial arts is to improve self-confidence.

#The First advantage of martial arts is to improve self-confidence.

The First advantage of martial arts is to improve self-confidence.

# The First advantage of martial arts is to improve self-confidence.

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The second advantage of doing martial arts is that you learn how to respect others.

# Second advantage of doing martial arts is how to respect others.

The second advantage of doing martial arts is how to respect others.

# Second advantage of doing martial arts is how to respect others.

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The wonderland that is described in the book is created through logic games, and, therefore, the success it has achieved in the most varied environments is understandable.

#The wonderland that is described in the book is created through logic games, and, therefore, it is understandable the success it has achieved in the most varied environments.

The wonderland that is described in the book is created through logic games, and, therefore, it is understandable the success it has achieved in the most varied environments.

# The wonderland that is described in the book is created through logic games, and, therefore, it is understandable the success it has achieved in the most varied environments.

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The exceptional play that we saw yesterday features all the iconic characters adapted to some extent to the present time, such as the White Rabbit, the Mad Hatter, the blue caterpillar, and the Queen of Hearts.

The exceptional play that we saw yesterday features all the iconic characters adapted to some extent adapted to the present time, such as, the White Rabbit, Mad Hatter, the blue caterpillar, or the Queen of Hearts.

The exceptional play that we saw yesterday features all the iconic characters adapted to some extent, adapted to the present time, such as, the White Rabbit, Mad Hatter, the blue caterpillar, or the Queen of Hearts.

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The only negative comment I could make is that you do not have the possibility to use your imagination in the same way as when you read the book.

#The only negative comment I could make is that you do not have the possibility to let your imagination in the same way that when you read the book.

The only negative comment I could make is that you do not have the possibility to let your imagination in the same way as when you read the book.

#The only negative comment I could make is that you do not have the possibility to let your imagination in the same way as when you read the book.

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However, I strongly recommend going to see this play because it has great appeal for both adults and children.

#However, I strongly recommend going to see this play because it has a great appeal to both adults and children.

The fact is, I strongly recommend going to see this play because it has a great appeal to both adults and children.

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This lesson was the third trial of giving students written instructions and having them explain to their classmates what activities needed to be done.

#This lesson was the third trail of giving students written instructions and having them explain to the classmates what activities need to be done.

The lesson was the third trail of giving students written instructions and having them explain to the classmates what activities need to be done.

#This lesson was the third trail of giving students written instructions and having them explain to the classmates what activities need to be done.

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This time, in order to further reduce my TTT, I handed over the correction of activities to the students as well.

#This time in order to further reduce my TTT, I handed over the correction of activities to the students as well.

# This time, in order to further reduce my TTT, I handed over the correction of activities to the students as well.

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The amount of talking done by the students was more than pleasing.

#The amount of talking done by the students was more than pleasing.

The amount of talking done by the students was more than pleasing.

#The amount of talking done by the students was more than pleasing.

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I had an exact copy of what the students had on their clue cards on a separate piece of paper this time rather than in the lesson plan itself.

#I had an exact copy of what the students had on their clue cards on a separate piece of paper this time rather than in the lesson plan its self.

# I had an exact copy of what the students had on their clue cards on a separate piece of paper this time rather than in the lesson plan its self.

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I highlighted anything that required action from me on my copy of the clues, e.g., handing a student the answers to an exercise.

# I highlighted anything that required an action from me on my copy of the clues e.g. handing a student the answers to an exercise.

# I highlighted anything that required an action from me on my copy of the clues e.g., handing a student the answers to an exercise.

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In hindsight, giving this much control to the class and introducing a new and tricky grammar point (past modals) was not the best choice.

# In heinz sight, giving this much control to the class and introducing a new and tricky grammar point (past modals) was not the best choice.

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Despite having timing issues, I feel that, thus far, this was the class with the most natural student participation and the lowest amount of TTT.

#Despite having timing issues, I feel that this class has been the class with the most natural student participation and the lowest amount of TTT.

#Despite having timing issues, I feel that, thus far, this was the class with the most natural student participation and the lowest amount of TTT.

# Despite having timing issues, I feel that thus far this was the class with the most natural student participation and the lowest amount of TTT.

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I thoroughly enjoyed the lesson and according to student feedback, so did they.

#I throughly enjoyed the lesson, and according to student feedback, so did they.

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It's a city where you can recreate a part of European history, thanks to the ancient and magnificent buildings, and where you can enjoy the latest technology and have fun.

# It's a city where you can recreate part of the European history thanks to the ancient and magnificent buildings, and where you can enjoy the last technologies and have fun.

The city where you can recreate a part of the European history thanks to the ancient and magnificent building, and where you can enjoy the last technologies and have fun.

# It's a city where you can recreate part of the European history thanks to the ancient and magnificent buildings, and where you can enjoy the last technologies and have fun.

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Despite people's opinions, if you have the opportunity to go, don't throw it away and check it out for yourself.

#Despite the people's opinions, if you have the opportunity to go, don't throw it away, and check it for yourself.

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As the saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed."

#As the saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed."

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If you respect your friends, then they will respect you.

# If you respect your friends, then they will respect you.

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I didn't know what was happening and why they were acting like that.

#I didn't know was happening, and why they were acting like that.

#I didn't know it was happening, and why they were acting like that.

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When I looked in the mirror, my face was spotted with red spots, and it kind of turned purple; when I looked at my hands and my arms, they were all red from my fingers when I was scratching them, and the parts that weren't red, they were spotted like my face.

When I looked at the mirror, my face was spotted with red spots, and it kind of turned purple when I looked at my hands and my arms, it was all red from my fingers when I was scratching them, and the parts that weren't red, they were spotted like my face.

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On the one hand, I have been learning English for so long that my good proficiency has given me a chance to get a position in an international team.

# On the one hand, I have been learning English for so long that my good profeciency has given me the chance to get a position in an international work team.

# On the one hand, I have been learning English for so long that my good proficiency has given me the chance to get a position in an international work team.

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On the other hand, I have learned French and Spanish just for a few months because I was curious to learn the official language of the countries where friends and relatives are living.

# On the other hand, I have learned French and Spanish just for a few months because I was curious to learn the language of the countries where friends and relatives are living.

# On the other hand, I have learned French and Spanish just for a few months because I was curious to learn the language of the countries where friends and relatives are living in.

#On the other hand, I have learned French and Spanish just for a few months because I was curious to learn the language of the countries where friends and relatives are living.

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I am only able to read simple worksheets and make a brief presentation about myself.

#I am only able to read simple worksheets and make a brief presentation about me.

#I am only able to read simple worksheets and to make a brief presentation about me.

#I am only able to read simple worksheets and make a brief presentation about me.

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As a student of these classes, especially in English, I realized that, although the classes were important, systematic language practice was essential for reaching an advanced level and, moreover, for maintaining it.

The students of these classes, especially, of English, realized that, although the classes were important, a systematic language practice was essential for reaching an advanced level and, moreover, for maintaining it.

#As a student of these classes, especially, of English, I realized that although the classes were important, a systematic language practice was essential for reaching an advanced level and, moreover, for maintaining it.

The students of these classes, especially, of English, realized that, although the classes were important, a systematic language practice was essential for reaching an advanced level and, moreover, for maintaining it.

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Government authorities told people to stay calm, and a curfew was established, but Peter was on a camping holiday with his best friends and only heard this when they met another group of people who, fortunately, had a radio.

The government authorities told people to stay calm and a curfew was established, but Peter was on the camping holiday with his best friends and only heard this when they met another group of people that, fortunately, had a radio.

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In order to be stronger in number, they befriended those people, and they helped each other.

# In order to be stronger in numbers, they befriended those people and helped each other.

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The new group worked very well together, but there was this girl he just couldn't stand at all.

#The new group worked very well together, but there was this girl he just couldn't stand at all.

The new group worked very well together, but there was this girl he just couldn't stand at all.

# The new group worked very well together, but there was this girl he just couldn't stand at all.

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"It's the end of the world, and I have to spend it with you?" he whispered. The night had already fallen, and they didn't want any unwanted visitors.

#"It's the end of the world, and I have to spend it with you? He whispered, the night had already fallen, and they didn't want any unwanted visitors.

The end of the world, and I have to spend it with you? He whispered, the night had already fallen, and they didn't want any unwanted visitors.

# "It's the end of the world, and I have to spend it with you? He whispered, the night had already fallen, and they didn't want any unwanted visitors.

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I'm also very good at first aid, so if someone is hurt, I'm very helpful with that too. I can do pretty much anything that you want me to. I love all kids, and I love spending time with them; I love playing outside and caring for all the children.

#I'm also very good at first aid, so if someone is hurt, I'm very helpful with that too, I can do pretty much anything that you want me to do, I love all kids, and I love spending time with them. I love playing outside and caring for all the children.

#I'm also very good at first aid, so if someone is hurt, I'm very helpful with that too, I can do pretty much anything that you want me to do, I love all the kids and I love spending time with them, I love playing outside and caring for all the children.

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Overall, I just love children.

#overall, I just love children.

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At the moment, I am struggling with the translation of my CV.

#At the moment, I am struggling with the translation of my CV.

#At the moment I am struggling with the translation of my CV.

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I have just found cheap accommodation in a hostel, which is very convenient for all the facilities.

#I have just found a cheap accommodation in a hostel, which is very convenient to all the facilities.

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Even though I am shy and I like my privacy, I think that during this experience, it will be better to have contact with foreign people to practice my spoken English as much as possible.

#Even though I am shy, I like my privacy, and I think that during this experience, it will be better to have contacts with foreign people to practice my spoken English as much as possible.

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Now, let's talk about the good things.

#Now let's talk about the good things.

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The aim of this experience is also to have fun and a great time with you.

#The aim of this experience is also having fun and great time with you.

The aim of this experience is also to have fun and have great time with you.

The aim of this experience is also having fun and having great time with you.

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For example, what about going for some walks in the countryside or renting a bike?

# For example, what about going for some walks in the countryside or renting a bike?

# For example, what about going for some walks across the countryside or renting a bike?

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I think it's so effective: having a long walk in the green hills that surround my town, breathing deeply, enjoying the perfume of nature and the wonderful sights and colors of flowers and trees, it's the best way for me to clear my mind.

#I think it's so effective: having a long walk on the green hills that surround my town, breathing deeply, enjoying the perfume of nature and the wonderful sights and colors of flowers and trees, it's the best for me to clear my mind.

#I think it's so effective: having a long walk in the green hills that surround my town, breathing deeply, enjoying the perfume of nature and the wonderful sights and colors of flowers and trees, it's the best for me to clear my mind.

# I think it's so effective: having a long walk on the green hills that surround my town, breathing deeply, enjoying the perfume of nature, and the wonderful sights and colors of flowers and trees, it's the best for me to clear my mind.

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There's no special advice to give to somebody who wants to start this activity: if you aim to do something good for your health and for your mind, just wear comfortable clothes, put a pair of trainers on, choose the most inspiring place and just go and enjoy every minute of it.

There's no special advice to give to somebody who wants to start this activity: if you aim to do something good for your health and for your mind, just wear comfortable clothes, put your pair of trainers on, choose the most inspiring place, and just go and enjoy any minute of it.

There's no special advice to give to somebody who wants to start this activity: if you aim to do something good for your health and your mind, just wear comfortable clothes, put your pair of trainers on, choose the most inspiring place, and just go and enjoy any minute of it.

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I would recommend 30 mins per day to get the most out of this activity: it doesn't take up too much of your spare time, and you'll get great benefits from it.

#30 min per day, to get the most of this activity: it doesn't take too much of your spare time, and you'll get great benefits from it.

# I would recommend 30 minutes per day to get the most of this activity: it doesn't take too much of your spare time, and you'll get great benefits from it.

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It's very cheap as well: apart from your jumpsuit and a pair of comfortable trainers, it doesn't require any extra cost for technical or sophisticated equipment.

# It's very cheap as well: except for your jumpsuit and a pair of comfortable trainers, it doesn't require any extra cost for technical or sophisticated equipment.

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I think this will be a very good experience for you because you can learn about another culture and other people's way of thinking.

#I think this is a very good experience to you because you can learn about another culture and people's way of thinking.

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So, I suggest you try to get a working holiday visa for Korea.

#So, I suggest you try to get a working holiday visa of Korea.

The so, I suggest you try to get a working holiday visa of Korea.

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As you know, if you have a normal tourism visa, you can't work.

#As you know, if you have a normal tourist visa, you can't work.

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If you get the internship, you can work as a real businessman.

# If you get the internship, you can work as a real businessman.

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In summer, you can enjoy many activities on the beach, and you can also go hiking.

#In summer, you can enjoy many activities on the beach and also you can go hiking.

# In summer, you can enjoy many activities on the beach and also you can go hiking.

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It is the most popular place that people want to go to.

# It is the most popular place that people want to go to.

#It is the most popular place that people want to go to.

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Not only was it going to change my life but also another person's life.

#Not only was it going to change my life, but also other people's lives.

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When we arrived at the police station, I met an officer called Michael.

# When we arrived at the police office, I met an officer called Michael.

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With over two hundred thousand dollars in his bag, he was a giant walking target.

# With over two hundred thousand dollars in his bag, he was a giant walking target.

#With over two hundred thousand dollars in his bag, he was a giant walking target.

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A police officer's car was zooming in his direction, sirens blaring.

#A police officer car was zooming in his direction, sirens blaring.

#A police officer's car was zooming in his direction, sirens blaring.

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But, on the other hand, when they travel abroad, it's easier to take a train or a plane because you arrive faster and you needn't find a place to park your car and, if you want to go somewhere, you can take a taxi or a bus or even the underground.

#But, on the other hand, when they travel abroad, it's easier to take a train or a plane because you arrive faster and you needn't find a place to park your car and if you want to go somewhere, you can take a taxi or a bus or even the underground.

# But, on the other hand, when they travel abroad, it's easier to take a train o a plane because you arrive faster and you needn't find a place to park your car, and if you want to go somewhere, you can take a taxi or a bus or even the underground.

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Anyway, I don't think public transport has a future, but public transport is used on different occasions than before, and when you go to a place you know you won't be able to find a place to park, and you can't waste time looking for where to park.

#Anyway, I don't think public transport has no future, but public transport is used on different occasions from before and when you go to a place you know you won't be able to find a place to park, and you can't waste time looking for where to park.

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To make bank notes, the first step is to design them properly.

# To make bank notes, the first step is to design them properly.

# To make bank notes, the first step is to properly design them.

# To make bank notes, the first step is to design them properly.

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Also, a special ink is printed on both sides of the sheet, and the images are slightly raised.

# Also, special ink is printed on both sides of the sheet and the images are slightly raised.

# Also, special ink is printed on both sides of the sheet, and the images are slightly raised.

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Sheets in the second group then get separated into good ones, which, together with good quality sheets, enter a process of packaging and distribution where separate notes are cut and finally enter the market, and bad ones, which go to disposal with bad quality sheets, where both groups get securely destroyed.

#Sheets in the second groups then get separated into good ones, which, together with good quality sheets, enter a process of packaging and distribution where seperate notes are cut and finally enter the market, and bad ones, which go to disposal with bad quality sheets, where both groups get securely destroyed.

The sheets in the second groups then get separated into good ones, which, together with good quality sheets, enter a process of packaging and distribution where seperate notes are cut and finally enter the market, and bad ones, which go to disposal with bad quality sheets, where both groups get securely destroyed.

The sheets in the second groups then get separated into good ones, which, together with good quality sheets, enter the process of packaging and distribution where the sheets are cut and finally enter the market, and bad ones, which go to disposal with bad quality sheets, where both groups get securely destroyed.

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My boyfriend is the best in the entire round world.

#My boyfriend is the best in all the entire world.

#My boyfriend is the best in all the whole world.

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I met him two years ago at a party, and since that day, my life has changed in many different ways.

#I met him two years ago in a party, and since that day, my life has changed in many different ways.

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When I first saw him, I never imagined that I would love that stranger this way.

#When I first saw him, I never imagined that I would love that stranger this way.

The first time I saw him, I never imagined that I would love that stranger this way.

#When I first saw him, I never imagined that I would love that stranger this way.

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As a secret, I can tell you that I want to marry him so badly; I swear to god that my life would be much better if I could live all of it with him.

#As a secret, I can tell you that I want to marry him so badly, I swear to god that my life would be much better if I could live all of it with him.

#As a secret, I can tell you that I want to marry him, so badly, I swear to god that my life would be much better if I could live all of it with him.

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"It's time for us to shine," His handwritten words came to life in her mind.

# "It's time for us to shine," His handwritten words come to life in her mind.

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She could distinctly hear his low, manly voice in her head.

#She could distinctly hear his low, manly voice in her head.

# She could distinctly hear his low, manly voice in her head.

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The person was holding her wrist, preventing her from wiping any sweat from her face.

#The person was holding her wrist, preventing her from wiping any sweat on her face.

The person was holding her wrist, preventing her from wiping any sweat on her face.

# The person was holding her wrist, preventing her from wiping any sweat on her face.

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Those blue eyes were much darker with insecurity, doubt, and mystery.

# This blue eyes, were much darker with insecurity, doubt, and mystery.

The blue eyes were much darker with insecurity, doubt, and mystery.

# This blue eyes, were much darker with insecurity, doubt, and mystery.

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I have them because I have paid for them, not for any other particular reason.

#I have them because I have paid for them, not for other reasons.

#I have them because I have paid for them, not for other particular reasons.

#I have them because I have paid for them, not for other reasons.

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You will find me to be a reliable person who has a professional, calm, and honest approach to all work-related matters.

# You will find me to be a reliable person who has a professional, calm, and honest approach to all work-related matters.

#1: You will find me to be a reliable person who has a professional, calm, and honest approach to all work related matters.

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Additionally, I would also like to point out some of my personal qualities and values that I believe are extremely important in this profession, such as very high motivation to learn and educate more in this field, great responsibility, and reliability. Furthermore, I am also very dedicated to achieving any planned results and goals as well as having well-developed communication skills, etc.

Additionally, I would like to point out some of my personal qualities and values and I believe that these are extremely important in this profession such as very high motivation to learn and educate in this field more, great responsibility and reliability, furthermore, I am also very dedicated to achieving any planned results and goals as well as possessing well developed communication skills etc.

Additionally, I would like also to point out some of my personal qualities and values, and I believe that these are extremely important in this profession such as very high motivation to learn and educate in this field more, great responsibility and reliability, furthermore, I am also very dedicated to achieving any planned results and goals as well as possessing well developed communication skills etc.

Additionally, I would like to also point out some of my personal qualities and values and I believe that are extremely important in this profession, such as very high motivation to learn and educate in this field more, great responsibility and reliability, furthermore, I am also very dedicated to achieving any planned results and goals as well as possessing well developed communication skills etc.

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Given my related experience and excellent abilities, I would appreciate your consideration for any available or appropriate position according to my education and skills.

# Given my related experience and excellent capabilities, I would appreciate your consideration for any available or appropriate position according to my education and skills.

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My CV, which is enclosed, includes additional information on my experience and skills.

# My CV, which is enclosed, contains additional information on my experience and skills.

The CV, which is enclosed, contains additional information on my experience and skills.

#My CV, which is enclosed, contains additional information about my experience and skills.

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We'd better do our exam as soon as we can. "

# We better do our exam as soon as we can.

The better we do our exam, as soon as we can, "

#We better do our exam as soon as we can.

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