Avinaash/finalDPOChallengeNewTest4 · Datasets at Hugging Face

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I would like to learn from others about the world, people, cultures, and languages and share this knowledge with others and be helpful in return :)	#I would like to learn from others about the world, people, cultures, and idiomatic languages and share this knowledge with others and be helpful in return :)	#I would like to learn from others about the world, people, cultures, and idiomatic languages and share this knowledge with others and be helpful in return :)	#I would like to learn from others about the world, people, cultures, and idiomatic languages and share this knowledge with others and be helpful in return :)	11	11	11
As well as the shops, some nice bars, and restaurants can be found.	#Beside the shops, some nice bars and restaurants can be found.	#Beside the shops, some nice bars and restaurants can be found.	#Beside the shops, some nice bars and restaurants can be found.	10	10	10
These panels are used to harness the light of the sun to produce electricity.	#These panels are used to bring the light of the sun to produce electricity.	The panels are used to bring the light of the sun to produce electricity.	#These panels are used to bring the light of the sun to produce electricity.	7	8	7
On the first Sunday of every month, a group of volunteers goes to the parks of the village to clean them and cut the grass.	#The first Sunday of every month, a group of volunteers goes to the parks of the village to clean them and cut the grass.	The first Sunday of every month, a group of volunteers goes to the parks of the village to clean them and cut the grass.	#The first Sunday of every month, a group of volunteers goes to the parks of the village to clean them and cut the grass.	4	4	4
Italy is famous for its typical food and rich culture of arts and history.	# Italy is famous for its typical food and culture rich in arts and history.	# Italy is famous for the typical food and culture rich of arts and history.	# Italy is famous for its typical food and culture rich in arts and history.	14	15	14
They will not only see one type of history but many because Italy, for many centuries, had an important function for trade and commerce.	# They will not only see one type of history but many because Italy, for many centuries, had an important function for exchanges and commerce.	# They will not only see one type of history but many because Italy, for many centuries, had an important function for exchanges and commerce.	The people will not only see one type of history but many because Italy, for many centuries, had an important function for exchanges and commerce.	9	9	14
So, I think that both hobbies have their advantages and disadvantages.	#So, I think that both hobbies have their advantages and disadvantages.	#So, I think that both hobbies have their advantages and disadvantages.	#So, I think that both hobbies have their advantages and disadvantages.	1	1	1
But, on the other hand, sport helps you to keep your muscles in tune.	#But, on the other hand, sport helps you to keep your muscles toned.	#But, on the other hand, sport helps you to keep your muscles toned.	The sport helps you to keep your muscles toned.	6	6	26
Many people feel that learning English, especially in 'England' or in 'the USA,' is better than learning that in a country that does not have English as its mother tongue.	#Many people feel that learning English, especially in 'England' or in 'The USA,' is better than learning that in a country that does not have English as its mother tongue.	#Many people feel that learning English, especially in 'England' or in 'The USA,' is better than learning that in a country that does not have English as its mother tongue.	The many people feel that learning English, especially in 'England' or in 'The USA,' is better than learning that in a country that does not have English as its mother tongue.	2	2	6
One argument in favor of this idea is that Peruvian people who learn English for a short period and then travel abroad show an improvement in just one or two months.	One argument in favor of this idea is that Peruvian people who learn English for a short period and then travel abroad have an enhancement in just one or two months.	One argument in favor of this idea is that Peruvian people who learn English for a short period and then travel abroad have an enhancement in just one or two months.	One argument in favor of this idea is that Peruvian people who learn English for a short period and then travel abroad have an enhancement in just one or two months.	10	10	10
Also, you can suffer from jet lag if you travel a long distance.	# Also, you can suffer from jet-lagged if you travel a long distance.	# Also, you can suffer from jet-lagged if you travel a long distance.	# Also, you can suffer from jet-lagged if you travel a long distance.	6	6	6
Her birthday was on Friday, and they all wanted to go to the greatest club in Barcelona that night to have some fun.	#Her birthday was in Friday, and they all wanted to go to the greatest club in Barcelona to have some fun.	The birthday was in Friday, and they all wanted to go to the greatest club in Barcelona to have some fun.	#Her birthday was on Friday, and they all wanted to go to the greatest club in Barcelona to have some fun.	13	15	12
Then the people from the hotel saw her for the last time.	# Then the people from the hotel saw her last time.	# Then the people from the hotel saw her last time.	# Then the people from the hotel saw her last time.	10	10	10
Her friends come back to their country, but Anna is still missing.	#Her friends came back to their country, but Anna still is missing.	The friends came back to their country, but Anna still is missing.	#Her friends came back to their country, but Anna still is missing.	8	10	8
Her parents and her sister are still looking for her.	#Her parents and her sister still looking for her.	#Her parents and her sister still looking for her.	#Her parents and her sister still looking for her.	5	5	5
If you want to meet a stranger, do not leave your friends or family without knowledge of where you want to go and who you are with whom.	# If you want to meet somebody strange, do not leave your friends or family without knowledge of who and where you want to go.	# If you want to meet somebody strange, do not leave your friends or family without knowledge of who and where you want to go.	# If you want to meet somebody strange, do not leave your friends or family without knowledge of who and where you want to go.	40	40	40
A private vehicle offers more privacy than public transport.	# Private vehicles offer more privacy than public vehicles.	The private vehicle offers more privacy than a public vehicle.	The private vehicle offers more privacy than a public vehicle.	13	14	14
On a hot day, a lady can't remove her coat to reduce body heat.	# On a hot day, the lady can't remove her coat to reduce body heat.	# On a hot day, the lady can't remove her coat to reduce body heat.	#On a hot day, the lady can't remove her coat to reduce body heat.	5	5	4
Hence, private vehicles give enough privacy and comfort for a family.	#Hence, private vehicles give enough privacy and comfort for a family.	#Hence, private vehicles give enough privacy and comfort for a family.	#Hence, private vehicles give enough privacy and comfort for a family.	1	1	1
A car can be driven very fast in order to reduce the time taken to travel.	#A car can be driven very fast in order to reduce the time taken to travel.	#A car can be driven very fast in order to reduce the time taken to travel.	#A car can be driven very fast in order to reduce the time taken to travel.	1	1	1
But he could not travel very fast on a bus in order to reach his destination very quickly.	#But he could not travel on a bus very fast in order to reach the destination very quickly.	#But he could not travel on a bus very fast in order to reach the destination very quickly.	#But he could not travel on a bus very fast in order to reach the destination very quickly.	18	18	18
In order to boost the use of public transport, the government or the governing body should consider these factors and must find a solution to these problems.	# In order to boost the usage of public transport, the government or the governing body should consider these factors and must find a solution to these problems.	# In order to boost the usage of public transport, the government or the governing body should consider these factors and must find a solution to these problems.	#In order to boost the usage of public transport, the government or the governing body should consider these factors and must find a solution to these problems.	4	4	3
Because of this tremendous outcome, I believe that our lives will change dramatically in the next 50 years, with greater extension to every aspect of our lives.	# For this tremendous outcome, I believe that our lives will change dramatically in the next 50 years, with greater extension to every aspect of our lives.	# For this tremendous outcome, I believe that our lives will change dramatically in the next 50 years, with greater extension to every aspect of our lives.	# For this tremendous outcome, I believe that our lives will change dramatically in the next 50 years, with greater extension to every aspect of our lives.	9	9	9
We can access all the knowledge from the Internet as we need it.	# We can access all the knowledge from the Internet as we need.	# We can access all the knowledge from the Internet as we need.	#We can access all the knowledge from the Internet as we need.	5	5	4
We can experience the most extraordinary dreams without harmful effects on our personalities.	# We can experience the most extraordinary dreams without harmful effects on our personalities.	# We can experience the most extraordinary dreams without harmful effects on our personalities.	# We can experience the most extraordinary dreams without harmful effects on our personalities.	2	2	2
The distance between people will increase dramatically until we finally wake up from all of this unrealistic convenience we have.	#The distance between people will increase dramatically until we finally wake up from all of these unrealistic convenience we have.	The distance between people will increase dramatically until we finally wake up from all of these unrealistic convenience we have.	#The distance between people will increase dramatically until we finally wake up from all of these unrealistic convenience we have.	3	2	3
For example, saving endangered wildlife and the scarce fish in the sea is much more important than those inventions which only make our lives more convenient.	# For example, saving the endanger wildlife and the scarce fish in the sea is much more important than those inventions which only make our lives more convenient.	The example of saving the endanger wildlife and the scarce fish in the sea is much more important than those inventions which only make our lives more convenient.	#For example, saving the endanger wildlife and the scarce fish in the sea is much more important than those inventions which only make our lives more convenient.	8	12	7
Nonetheless, we have to confront the truth that resources from all over the world are distributed unfairly.	#Nonetheless, we have to confront the truth that the resources from all over the world are distributed unfairly.	#Nonetheless, we have to confront the truth that the resources from all over the world are distributed unfairly.	#Nonetheless, we have to confront the truth that the resources from all over the world are distributed unfairly.	5	5	5
The top 50 richest in the world hold most of the power to control the direction of our future.	# Top 50 riches in the world hold most of the power to control the direction of our future.	The top 50 riches in the world hold most of the power to control the direction of our future.	# Top 50 riches in the world hold the most of the power to control the direction of our future.	5	1	9
However, you can't travel by train when you want to cross the sea.	#However, you can't travel by train when you want to cross the sea.	#However, you can't travel by train when you want to cross the sea.	#However, you can't travel by train when you want to cross the sea.	1	1	1
It is faster than the other two, it is not difficult to travel on it, and it is quite comfortable.	# It is faster than the two, it is no difficult to travel on it, and it is quite comfortable.	# It is faster than the two, it is no difficult to travel on it, and it is quite comfortable.	#It is faster than the two, it is no difficult to travel on it, and it is quite comfortable.	9	9	8
Also, you can travel to different places and longer distances, whereas while boating, for example, you can only travel to places where there is a connection to the sea.	# Also, you can travel to different places and longer distances while boating, for example, you can only travel to places where the connection to the sea is.	# Also, you can travel to different places and longer distances while boating, for example, you can only travel to places where the connection to the sea.	# Also, you can travel to different places and longer distances while boating, for example, you can only travel to places where the connection to the sea is.	21	18	21
Firstly, I strongly recommend you to visit the main capital, which is full of marvelous historical and cultural sites, such as museums, art galleries, monuments, and churches.	# First, I strongly recommend you to visit the main capital, which is full of historical and cultural sites such as museums, art galleries, monuments, and churches.	# First, I strongly recommend you to visit the main capital, which is full of historical and cultural sites, such as museums, art galleries, monuments, and churches.	The first thing I strongly recommend you to visit is the main capital, which is full of historical and cultural sites, such as museums, art galleries, monuments, and churches.	15	14	24
If at some point, you are fed up with art and culture, the city offers you a lot of leisure facilities such as concerts, exhibitions, festivals and so on!	#Whether at some point you are fed up with art and culture, the city offers you a lot of leisure time facilities such as concerts, exhibitions, festivals, and so on!	#Whether at some point you are fed up with art and culture, the city offers you a lot of leisure time facilities such as concerts, exhibitions, festivals, and so on!	A few years ago, you were fed up with art and culture, the city offers you a lot of leisure time facilities such as concerts, exhibitions, festivals, and so on!	15	15	23
In connection with your desire to find a job, you should try to find a temporary job in the tourism field: as you wrote, you're searching for a job for a month, and I reckon that a seasonal job for the summer would perfectly meet your expectations.	In connection with your desire to find a job, you should try to find a temporary job in the tourism field: as you wrote, you're searching for a monthly job and I reckon that a seasonal job for the summer would perfectly fit your expectations.	In connection with your desire to find a job, you should try to find a temporary job in the tourism field: as you wrote, you're searching for a monthly job and I reckon that a seasonal job for the summer would perfectly fit your expectations.	In connection with your desire to find a job, you should try to find a temporary job in the tourism field: as you wrote, you're searching for a monthly job and I reckon that a seasonal job for the summer would perfectly fit your expectations.	16	16	16
After my graduation,	# After my graduation.	# After my graduation.	#After my graduation.	3	3	2
In 2000,	# In 2000.	# In 2000.	# In 2000.	3	3	3
My enriched experience in the English language and my knowledge of petroleum expressions qualified me to work in the Training and Developing Directorate, mainly in training abroad.	# My enriched experience in the English language and my knowledge of petroleum expression qualified me to work in the Training and Developing Directorate mainly in abroad training.	The enriched experience in the English language and my knowledge of petroleum expression qualified me to work in the Training and Developing Directorate mainly in abroad training.	#My enriched experience in the English language and my knowledge of petroleum expression qualified me to work in the Training and Developing Directorate, mainly in abroad training.	18	19	16
I attended many training courses in different fields like computers, human resources, and the English language that were held in Baghdad, at the British Council in Amman, and last one was in London at luminous language solution.	#I attended many training courses in different fields like computer, human resources, English language, that held in Baghdad, British Council in Amman, and last one was in London at the luminous language solution.	#I attended many training courses in different fields like computer, human resources, English language, that held in Baghdad, British Council in Amman, and last one was in London at the luminous language solution.	#I attended many training courses in different fields like computer, human resources, English language that held in Baghdad, the British Council in Amman, and last one was in London at the luminous language solution.	27	27	22
In spite of that, I did not give up.	# In spite of that, I did not give up.	# In spite of that, I did not give up.	# In spite of that, I did not give up.	2	2	2
It's quite an architecturally important building, I think, plus there are about a million books, so you can learn something new about our culture.	#It's quite an architecturally significant building I think, plus there are about million books, so you can learn something new about our culture.	#It's quite an architecturally significant building I think, plus there are about million books, so you can learn something new about our culture.	#It's quite an architecturally significant building I think, plus there are about million books, so you can learn something new about our culture.	11	11	11
There is a pub called Richard's. You can easily find it because it's a huge green building just next to the library.	# There is a pub called Richard's. You can easily find it because it's a huge green building next to the library.	# There is a pub called Richard's. You can easily find it because it's a huge green building just next to the library.	# There is a pub called Richard's. You can easily find it because it's a huge green building just next to the library.	7	2	2
There you can taste our national cuisine, but their international cuisine is also tasty.	# There you can taste our national cuisine, and our international cuisine is tasty.	# There you can taste our national cuisine, and our international cuisine is tasty.	What you can taste is our national cuisine, and our international cuisine is tasty.	14	14	19
Just do not order the pancakes because they make really bad pancakes.	#Just do not order the pancakes, because they are really bad pancakes.	#Just do not order the pancakes, because they are really bad pancakes.	#Just do not order pancakes because they are really bad pancakes.	4	4	7
If I were you, I would order the shots of alcohol because there is a toy train that will deliver the shots to you.	If I were you, I would order the shots of alcohol because there is a toy train which will deliver the shots to you.	If I were you, I would order the shots of alcohol because there is a toy train which will deliver the shots to you.	If I were you, I would order the shots of alcohol because there is a toy train that will deliver the shots to you.	4	4	0
In front of the building are enormous reflectors which shine into the darkness.	# In front of the building, are enormous reflectors which shine into the darkness.	# In front of the building, are enormous reflectors which shine into the darkness.	The building is enormous reflectors, which shine into the darkness.	3	3	17
Not far from the town lies the zoo.	#Not far from the town lies a zoo.	The zoo is not far from the town.	#Not far from the town, lies the zoo.	4	24	2
This is because people who have a good sense of humor can bring joy to others.	#This is because people who have a good sense of humor can bring joy to others.	#This is because people who have a good sense of humor can bring joy to others.	#This is because people who have a good sense of humor can bring joy to others.	1	1	1
Also, people can have a good relationship when they have a good sense of humor.	#Also, people could have a good relationship when they have a good sense of humor.	#Also, people could have a good relationship when they have a good sense of humor.	# Also, people could have a good relationship when they have a good sense of humor.	5	5	6
First, people who have a good sense of humor can make others laugh.	# First, people who have a good sense of humor can make others laugh.	# First, people who have a good sense of humor can make others laugh.	# First, people who have a good sense of humor can make others laugh.	2	2	2
We like to talk to her because she can always bring us happiness.	The people like to talk to her because she always brings happiness to us.	# We like to talk to her because she always brings happiness to us.	What we like to talk to her because she always brings happiness to us.	21	14	17
To sum up, people who have a good sense of humor can bring people happiness.	#To sum up, people who have a good sense of humor can bring happiness to people.	#To sum up, people who have a good sense of humor can bring happiness to people.	# To sum up, people who have a good sense of humor can bring happiness to people.	16	16	17
In the trend of globalization today, the success or failure of a business depends on many different factors.	# In the trend of globalization today, the success or failure of the business depends on many various factors.	# In the trend of globalization today, the success or failure of the business depends on many various factors.	# In the trend of globalization today, the success or failure of a business depends on many different factors.	14	14	2
In addition, good products with reasonable prices will always attract the attention of customers.	#Besides, good products with reasonable prices will always attract the attention of customers.	#Besides, good products with reasonable prices will always attract the attention of customers.	#Besides, good products with reasonable prices will always attract the attention of customers.	10	10	10
In ancient times, every child loved to play games outside their homes, and they were stronger than children in today's world.	The ancient times, every child loved to play games outside their homes, and they were more strong than children in today's world.	#In ancient times, every child loved to play games outside their homes, and they were stronger than children in today's world.	#In ancient times, every child loved to play games outside their homes, and they were stronger than children in today's world.	10	1	1
There are many games that children can play, like cricket, badminton, football, etc.	# There are many games that children can play like cricket, badminton, football, etc.	# There are many games that children can play, like cricket, badminton, football, etc.	# There are many games that children can play like cricket, badminton, football, etc.	3	2	3
Our world's great scientists have invented the internet to solve various distant problems.	# Our world's great scientist has invented the internet to solve various distant problems.	The world's great scientist has invented the internet to solve various distant problems.	#Our world's great scientist has invented the internet to solve various distant problems.	5	6	4
Using the internet in the wrong way may affect their studies and health as well.	#Using the internet in the wrong manner may affect their studies and health as well.	#Using the internet in the wrong manner may affect their studies and health as well.	The internet in the wrong way may affect their studies and health as well.	6	6	7
By playing physical games, they will not only improve their health, but they can also gain concentration.	#By playing physical games, they will not only improve their health but can also gain concentration.	#By playing physical games, they will not only improve their health but can also gain concentration.	#By playing physical games, they will not only improve their health but can also gain concentration.	7	7	7
They should try to understand the importance of physical games and also play them regularly.	# They should try to understand the importance of physical games and also play them regularly.	# They should try to understand the importance of physical games and also play them regularly.	# They should try to understand the importance of physical games and also play them regularly.	2	2	2
Also, I'm a good cook; at one school I taught at, we made cheese and pepperoni pizzas!	#Also, I'm a good cook; at one school, I'd taught at we made cheese and pepperoni pizzas!	#Also, I'm a good cook; at one school, I'd taught at we made cheese and pepperoni pizzas!	#Also, I'm a good cook; at one school, I'd taught at we made cheese and pepperoni pizzas!	5	5	5
I am always punctual. I'll be good at preparing all the events as I am, as I already told you, organized.	#I am always punctual. I'll be good at preparing all the events as I am- as I already told you- organized.	#I am always punctual. I'll be good at preparing all the events as I am- as I already told you- organized.	#I am always punctual. I'll be good at preparing all the events as I am- as I already told you- organized.	3	3	3
Finally, to conclude my letter, I just want to say: Please choose me!	#Finally, to conclude my letter, I just want to say: Please choose me!	#Finally, to conclude my letter, I just want to say: Please choose me!	# finally, to conclude my letter, I just want to say: Please choose me!	1	1	3
I will make summer camp a much better place to be!	#I will make summer camp a much better place to be in!	#I will make summer camp a much better place to be in!	#I will make summer camp a much better place to be in!	4	4	4
If I can say, the beaches on those islands are more beautiful and natural than those in Java.	# If I can say, beaches in those islands are more beautiful and natural than in Java island.	The beaches in those islands are more beautiful and natural than in Java island.	The beaches in those islands are more beautiful and natural than in Java island.	19	28	28
If you choose to travel by plane from Jakarta to Bali, the trip will be much shorter, taking only two hours.	# If you choose to travel by plane from Jakarta to Bali, the trip will be much shorter, spending only two hours.	# If you choose to travel by plane from Jakarta to Bali, the trip will be much shorter, spending only two hours.	#If you choose to travel by plane from Jakarta to Bali, the trip will be much shorter, spending only two hours.	7	7	6
Also, you can interact for longer with other passengers, especially native Indonesians, just in case you need to find out more about Indonesia as you would like to get a temporary job here.	Also, you can interact longer with other passengers, especially native Indonesians, just in case you need to explore more about Indonesia as you would like to get a temporary job here.	Also, you can interact longer with other passengers, especially native Indonesians, just in case you need to explore more about Indonesia as you would like to get a temporary job here.	Also, you can interact longer with other passengers, especially native Indonesians, just in case you need to explore more about Indonesia as you would like to get a temporary job here.	11	11	11
Indonesian people are famous for their friendliness, so you could start a conversation with them to ask anything about Indonesia; they will answer your questions with pleasure.	Indonesian people are famous for their friendliness, so you could start a conversation with them to ask anything about Indonesia; they will answer your questions with pleasure.	Indonesian people are famous for their friendliness, so you could start a conversation with them to ask anything about Indonesia; they will answer your questions with pleasure.	Indonesian people are famous with their friendliness, so you could start a conversation with them to ask anything about Indonesia; they will answer your questions with pleasure.	0	0	4
If you like hiking, you could explore the mountains in Java: Semeru, Ranu Kumbolo, Bromo, etc.	# If you like hiking, you could explore mountains in Java: Semeru, Ranu Kumbolo, Bromo, etc.	# If you like hiking, you could explore mountains in Java: Semeru, Ranu Kumbolo, Bromo, etc.	#If you like hiking, you could explore mountains in Java: Semeru, Ranu Kumbolo, Bromo, etc.	6	6	5
It can be a little bit difficult to find a temporary job here unless you have got any connections with agencies or local people.	#It can be a little bit difficult to find a temporal job here, unless you got any connections with agency or local people.	#It can be a little bit difficult to find a temporal job here, unless you got any connections with agency or local people.	The little bit of difficulty in finding a temporal job here, unless you got any connections with agency or local people.	12	12	30
If in the past, they just held weddings at home to save money, now they tend to choose restaurants and hotels instead.	# If in the past, they just held weddings at home to save money, now they tend to choose restaurants and hotels instead.	# If in the past, they just held weddings at home to save money, now they tend to choose restaurants and hotels instead.	# If in the past, they just held weddings at home to save money, now they tend to choose restaurants and hotels instead.	2	2	2
Those who have lost contact for a long time can exchange current information and keep in touch again.	#Those who lose contact for a long time can exchange current information and keep in touch again.	The ones who lose contact for a long time can exchange current information and keep in touch again.	#Those who lose contact for a long time can exchange current information and keep in touch again.	7	10	7
Instead of that, this amount of money could help the couple buy a house or car for their new life.	# Instead of that, this amount of money can help the couple buy a house or car for a new life.	# Instead of that, this amount of money can help the couple buy a house or car for a new life.	# Instead of that, this amount of money can help the couple buy a house or car for a new life.	11	11	11
At first, when the ski lift rose up to the station, I was terrified, as I was suspended above the ground.	#At first, when the ski lift rose up to the station, I was terrified as I was suspended from the ground.	#At first, when the ski lift rose up to the station, I was terrified as I was suspended from the ground.	#At first, when the ski lift rose up to the station, I was terrified as I was suspended from the ground.	6	6	6
Another thing is that I would improve my skills in working with children, and I would find the money useful to expand my academic qualifications.	#Another thing is that: I would improve my skills in working with children and I find the money useful to expand my academic qualifications.	#Another thing is that: I would improve my skills in working with children, and I find the money useful to expand my academic qualifications.	#Another thing is that: I would improve my skills in working with children, and I find the money useful to expand my academic qualifications.	9	8	8
I believe this job would suit me for the following reasons: I am familiar with the environment in summer camps as I spent my previous summer in one.	I believe this job would suit me for the following reasons: I am familiarized with the environment in summer camps as I spent my previous summer in one.	I believe this job would suit me for the following reasons: I am familiarized with the environment in summer camps as I spent my previous summer in one.	I believe this job would suit me for the following reasons: I am familiarized with the environment in summer camps as I spent my previous summer in one.	4	4	4
All in all, I can assure you that I would be a great addition to your team of workers for all the reasons stated above.	#All in all, I can assure you that I would be a great addition to your team of workers for all the reasons stated above.	#All in all, I can assure you that I would be a great addition to your team of workers for all the reasons stated above.	# All in all, I can assure you that I would be a great addition to your team of workers for all the reasons mentioned above.	1	1	8
When I went to class, there was a group of students who had already studied together for some time.	#When I went to class, there was a group of students who had already studied together for some time.	#When I went to class, there was a group of students who had already studied together for some time.	#When I went to class, there was a group of students who had already studied together for some time.	1	1	1
I needed practice with speaking so much, so it was just what the doctor ordered!	#I was needed practice in speaking so much, so it was what the doctor ordered!	#I was needed practice in speaking so much, so it was what the doctor ordered!	#I was needed practice in speaking so much, so it was what the doctor ordered!	13	13	13
But when the dinner started, there was nothing to worry about because my classmates appeared supportive and patient.	The dinner started when the dinner started, and there was nothing to worry about because my classmates appeared supportive and patient.	#But when the dinner started, there was nothing to worry about because my classmates appeared supportive and patient.	#But when the dinner started, there was nothing to worry about because my classmates appeared supportive and patient.	21	1	1
The guy who invited me, Francois from France, spoke with me more than the others.	# Guy who invited me, Francois from France, spoke with me more than others.	The guy who invited me, Francois from France, spoke with me more than others.	The guy who invited me, Francois from France, spoke with me more than others.	8	4	4
Starting to spend every evening together, we spoke about the past, and expressed our thoughts and future plans.	The beginning of the evening, we started to spend every evening together, we spoke about past, expressed our thoughts and future plans.	The starting to spend every evening together, we spoke about past, expressed our thoughts and future plans.	The beginning to spend every evening together, we spoke about past, expressed our thoughts and future plans.	44	13	18
After two weeks, he returned to France, but we keep in touch even today.	# After two weeks, he returned to France, but we keep in touch even today.	# After two weeks, he returned to France, but we keep in touch even today.	The following two weeks, he returned to France, but we keep in touch even today.	2	2	12
Do you remember that I went to the Muse concert in Dublin last month?	# Did you remember that I went to the Muse concert in Dublin last month?	# Did you remember that I went to the Muse concert in Dublin last month?	# Did you remember that I went to the Muse concert in Dublin last month?	4	4	4
I could see the show from my station, but the most exciting thing happened at the end of the show.	#I could see the show from my place, but the most exciting thing happened at the end of the show.	#I could see the show from my place, but the most exciting thing happened at the end of the show.	#I could see the show from my place, but the most exciting thing happened at the end of the show.	7	7	7
The increase in fuel cost, for example, will surely have a negative impact on the use of private vehicles.	#The increase in fuel cost for example, will surely have a negative impact on the use of private vehicles.	The increase in the fuel cost for example, will surely have a negative impact on the use of private vehicles.	# The increase in fuel cost for example, will surely have a negative impact on the use of private vehicles.	2	5	3
Obviously, the quality of public transport has to be improved.	#Obviously, the quality of public transport has to be improved.	#Obviously, the quality of public transport has to be improved.	#Obviously, the quality of public transport has to be improved.	1	1	1
The latest research carried out by The Health Department in Spain shows that young people are not as healthy as twenty years ago.	The latest research carried out by The Health Department in Spain shows that young people are not as healthy as twenty years ago.	The latest research carried out by The Health Department in Spain shows that young people are not as healthy as twenty years ago.	The latest research carried out by The Health Department in Spain shows that young people are not as healthy as twenty years ago.	0	0	0
That could be a bigger problem if the trend is maintained for a long time because public spending could rise by 60% in the next 10 years.	# That could be a higher problem if the trend is maintained for a long time because public spending could raise 60% in the next 10 years.	# That could be a higher problem if the trend is maintained for a long time because public spending could raise 60% in the next 10 years.	# That could be a higher problem if the trend is maintained for a long time because public spending could raise 60% in the next 10 years.	8	8	8
Finally, it is proved that youths are devoting less time to doing exercise than they should and, as a consequence, they are not improving their general health enough.	# finally, it is proven that youths are devoting less time to do exercise than they should, and as a consequence, they are not improving their general health enough.	# finally, it is proven that youths are devoting less time to do exercise than they should, and as a consequence, they are not improving their general health enough.	# finally, it is proven that youths are devoting less time to do exercise than they should, and as a consequence, they are not improving their general health enough.	9	9	9
As far as I am concerned, I think the Spanish government should implement health programs and advertising campaigns in order to improve the health of the young population.	#As far as I am concerned, I think the Spanish government should implement health programs and advertisements campaigns in order to improve health in the young population.	#As far as I am concerned, I think the Spanish government should implement health programs and advertisement campaigns in order to improve health in the young population.	The Spanish government should implement health programs and advertisements campaigns in order to improve health in the young population.	12	11	46
Traveling by car is only convenient in a restricted sense, while public transport is more convenient overall.	#Travelling by car is only convenient in a restricted sense, while public transport is overall more convenient.	#Travelling by car is only convenient in a restricted sense, while public transport is overall more convenient.	#Travelling by car is only convenient in a restricted sense, while public transport is overall more convenient.	18	18	18
What is meant by a restricted sense is that for adults who are healthy and able-bodied, having access to personal transportation is arguably quite attractive.	# What is meant by a restricted sense is that for adults, who are healthy and able bodied, having access to personal transportation is arguably quite attractive.	# What is meant by a restricted sense is that for adults, who are healthy and able bodied, having access to personal transportation is arguably quite attractive.	# What is meant by a restricted sense is that for adults, who are healthy and able to move around, having access to personal transportation is arguably quite attractive.	4	4	15
Anyways, if you feel that going to your music classes is stressful and you don't have time to do it, try a new sport! Maybe soccer or go running in the mornings, as I said before. Believe me, golf is kinda fun, but you don't exercise as much as you could.	Anyways, if you feel that going to your music classes is stressful and you don't have time to do it, try a new sport! Maybe soccer or go running in the mornings as I said before, believe me, golf is kinda funny, but you don't exercise too much as you could.	Anyways, if you feel that going to your music classes is stressful and you don't have time to do it, try a new sport! Maybe soccer or go running in the mornings as I said before, believe me, golf is kinda funny, but you don't exercise too much as you could.	Anyways, if you feel that going to your music classes is stressful and you don't have time to do it, try a new sport! Maybe soccer or go running in the mornings as I said before, believe me, golf is kinda funny, but you don't exercise too much as you could.	8	8	8
You certainly will learn to fail and win, but the most important thing that you will learn is never to give up.	# You certainly will learn to fail and win, but the most important thing that you will learn is never give up.	# You certainly will learn to fail and win, but the most important thing that you will learn is never give up.	# You certainly will learn to fail and win, but the most important thing that you will learn is never give up.	5	5	5
People have had a need for communication since the dawn of time.	# People have had a need for communication since the dawn of time.	The people have had a need for communication since the dawn of time.	# People have had a need for communication since the dawn of time.	2	5	2
Every human being has a need for socializing, and that is the first reason why I believe we start making friends.	#Every human being has a need for socialising, and that is the first reason why I believe we start making friends.	#Every human being has a need for socialising, and that is the first reason why I believe we start making friends.	#every human being has a need for socialising, and that is the first reason why I believe we start making friends.	2	2	3
Personally, I usually get on with people pretty well and make new friends easily as I am a natural extrovert (or so I think).	#Personally, I usually get on with people pretty well and make new friends easily as I am a natural extrovert (or so I think).	#Personally, I usually get on with people pretty well and make new friends easily as I am a natural extrovert (or so I think).	#Personally, I usually get on with people pretty well and make new friends easily as I am a natural extrovert (or so I think).	1	1	1
A true friendship forms itself on a foundation of strong mutual understanding, and this takes a good deal of time.	#A true friendship forms on a basis of strong mutual understanding and this takes a good deal of time.	The true friendship itself forms on a basis of strong mutual understanding, and this takes a good deal of time.	#A true friendship itself forms on a basis of strong mutual understanding and this takes a good deal of time.	17	22	21
I thought that he must have called reception for some wine, as the waitress said that every night after he had eaten, he always drank a glass of wine.	#I thought that he must have called the reception for some wine, as the waitress said that every night after he had eaten, he always drank a glass of wine.	#I thought that he must have called the reception for some wine, as the waitress said that every night after he had eaten, he always drank a glass of wine.	#I thought that he must have called the reception for some wine, as the waitress said that every night after he had eaten, he always drank a glass of wine.	5	5	5

I would like to learn from others about the world, people, cultures, and languages and share this knowledge with others and be helpful in return :)

#I would like to learn from others about the world, people, cultures, and idiomatic languages and share this knowledge with others and be helpful in return :)

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As well as the shops, some nice bars, and restaurants can be found.

#Beside the shops, some nice bars and restaurants can be found.

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These panels are used to harness the light of the sun to produce electricity.

#These panels are used to bring the light of the sun to produce electricity.

The panels are used to bring the light of the sun to produce electricity.

#These panels are used to bring the light of the sun to produce electricity.

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On the first Sunday of every month, a group of volunteers goes to the parks of the village to clean them and cut the grass.

#The first Sunday of every month, a group of volunteers goes to the parks of the village to clean them and cut the grass.

The first Sunday of every month, a group of volunteers goes to the parks of the village to clean them and cut the grass.

#The first Sunday of every month, a group of volunteers goes to the parks of the village to clean them and cut the grass.

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Italy is famous for its typical food and rich culture of arts and history.

# Italy is famous for its typical food and culture rich in arts and history.

# Italy is famous for the typical food and culture rich of arts and history.

# Italy is famous for its typical food and culture rich in arts and history.

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They will not only see one type of history but many because Italy, for many centuries, had an important function for trade and commerce.

# They will not only see one type of history but many because Italy, for many centuries, had an important function for exchanges and commerce.

The people will not only see one type of history but many because Italy, for many centuries, had an important function for exchanges and commerce.

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So, I think that both hobbies have their advantages and disadvantages.

#So, I think that both hobbies have their advantages and disadvantages.

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But, on the other hand, sport helps you to keep your muscles in tune.

#But, on the other hand, sport helps you to keep your muscles toned.

The sport helps you to keep your muscles toned.

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Many people feel that learning English, especially in 'England' or in 'the USA,' is better than learning that in a country that does not have English as its mother tongue.

#Many people feel that learning English, especially in 'England' or in 'The USA,' is better than learning that in a country that does not have English as its mother tongue.

The many people feel that learning English, especially in 'England' or in 'The USA,' is better than learning that in a country that does not have English as its mother tongue.

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One argument in favor of this idea is that Peruvian people who learn English for a short period and then travel abroad show an improvement in just one or two months.

One argument in favor of this idea is that Peruvian people who learn English for a short period and then travel abroad have an enhancement in just one or two months.

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Also, you can suffer from jet lag if you travel a long distance.

# Also, you can suffer from jet-lagged if you travel a long distance.

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Her birthday was on Friday, and they all wanted to go to the greatest club in Barcelona that night to have some fun.

#Her birthday was in Friday, and they all wanted to go to the greatest club in Barcelona to have some fun.

The birthday was in Friday, and they all wanted to go to the greatest club in Barcelona to have some fun.

#Her birthday was on Friday, and they all wanted to go to the greatest club in Barcelona to have some fun.

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Then the people from the hotel saw her for the last time.

# Then the people from the hotel saw her last time.

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Her friends come back to their country, but Anna is still missing.

#Her friends came back to their country, but Anna still is missing.

The friends came back to their country, but Anna still is missing.

#Her friends came back to their country, but Anna still is missing.

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Her parents and her sister are still looking for her.

#Her parents and her sister still looking for her.

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If you want to meet a stranger, do not leave your friends or family without knowledge of where you want to go and who you are with whom.

# If you want to meet somebody strange, do not leave your friends or family without knowledge of who and where you want to go.

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A private vehicle offers more privacy than public transport.

# Private vehicles offer more privacy than public vehicles.

The private vehicle offers more privacy than a public vehicle.

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On a hot day, a lady can't remove her coat to reduce body heat.

# On a hot day, the lady can't remove her coat to reduce body heat.

#On a hot day, the lady can't remove her coat to reduce body heat.

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Hence, private vehicles give enough privacy and comfort for a family.

#Hence, private vehicles give enough privacy and comfort for a family.

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A car can be driven very fast in order to reduce the time taken to travel.

#A car can be driven very fast in order to reduce the time taken to travel.

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But he could not travel very fast on a bus in order to reach his destination very quickly.

#But he could not travel on a bus very fast in order to reach the destination very quickly.

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In order to boost the use of public transport, the government or the governing body should consider these factors and must find a solution to these problems.

# In order to boost the usage of public transport, the government or the governing body should consider these factors and must find a solution to these problems.

#In order to boost the usage of public transport, the government or the governing body should consider these factors and must find a solution to these problems.

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Because of this tremendous outcome, I believe that our lives will change dramatically in the next 50 years, with greater extension to every aspect of our lives.

# For this tremendous outcome, I believe that our lives will change dramatically in the next 50 years, with greater extension to every aspect of our lives.

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We can access all the knowledge from the Internet as we need it.

# We can access all the knowledge from the Internet as we need.

#We can access all the knowledge from the Internet as we need.

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We can experience the most extraordinary dreams without harmful effects on our personalities.

# We can experience the most extraordinary dreams without harmful effects on our personalities.

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The distance between people will increase dramatically until we finally wake up from all of this unrealistic convenience we have.

#The distance between people will increase dramatically until we finally wake up from all of these unrealistic convenience we have.

The distance between people will increase dramatically until we finally wake up from all of these unrealistic convenience we have.

#The distance between people will increase dramatically until we finally wake up from all of these unrealistic convenience we have.

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For example, saving endangered wildlife and the scarce fish in the sea is much more important than those inventions which only make our lives more convenient.

# For example, saving the endanger wildlife and the scarce fish in the sea is much more important than those inventions which only make our lives more convenient.

The example of saving the endanger wildlife and the scarce fish in the sea is much more important than those inventions which only make our lives more convenient.

#For example, saving the endanger wildlife and the scarce fish in the sea is much more important than those inventions which only make our lives more convenient.

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Nonetheless, we have to confront the truth that resources from all over the world are distributed unfairly.

#Nonetheless, we have to confront the truth that the resources from all over the world are distributed unfairly.

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The top 50 richest in the world hold most of the power to control the direction of our future.

# Top 50 riches in the world hold most of the power to control the direction of our future.

The top 50 riches in the world hold most of the power to control the direction of our future.

# Top 50 riches in the world hold the most of the power to control the direction of our future.

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However, you can't travel by train when you want to cross the sea.

#However, you can't travel by train when you want to cross the sea.

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It is faster than the other two, it is not difficult to travel on it, and it is quite comfortable.

# It is faster than the two, it is no difficult to travel on it, and it is quite comfortable.

#It is faster than the two, it is no difficult to travel on it, and it is quite comfortable.

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Also, you can travel to different places and longer distances, whereas while boating, for example, you can only travel to places where there is a connection to the sea.

# Also, you can travel to different places and longer distances while boating, for example, you can only travel to places where the connection to the sea is.

# Also, you can travel to different places and longer distances while boating, for example, you can only travel to places where the connection to the sea.

# Also, you can travel to different places and longer distances while boating, for example, you can only travel to places where the connection to the sea is.

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Firstly, I strongly recommend you to visit the main capital, which is full of marvelous historical and cultural sites, such as museums, art galleries, monuments, and churches.

# First, I strongly recommend you to visit the main capital, which is full of historical and cultural sites such as museums, art galleries, monuments, and churches.

# First, I strongly recommend you to visit the main capital, which is full of historical and cultural sites, such as museums, art galleries, monuments, and churches.

The first thing I strongly recommend you to visit is the main capital, which is full of historical and cultural sites, such as museums, art galleries, monuments, and churches.

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If at some point, you are fed up with art and culture, the city offers you a lot of leisure facilities such as concerts, exhibitions, festivals and so on!

#Whether at some point you are fed up with art and culture, the city offers you a lot of leisure time facilities such as concerts, exhibitions, festivals, and so on!

A few years ago, you were fed up with art and culture, the city offers you a lot of leisure time facilities such as concerts, exhibitions, festivals, and so on!

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In connection with your desire to find a job, you should try to find a temporary job in the tourism field: as you wrote, you're searching for a job for a month, and I reckon that a seasonal job for the summer would perfectly meet your expectations.

In connection with your desire to find a job, you should try to find a temporary job in the tourism field: as you wrote, you're searching for a monthly job and I reckon that a seasonal job for the summer would perfectly fit your expectations.

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After my graduation,

# After my graduation.

#After my graduation.

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In 2000,

# In 2000.

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My enriched experience in the English language and my knowledge of petroleum expressions qualified me to work in the Training and Developing Directorate, mainly in training abroad.

# My enriched experience in the English language and my knowledge of petroleum expression qualified me to work in the Training and Developing Directorate mainly in abroad training.

The enriched experience in the English language and my knowledge of petroleum expression qualified me to work in the Training and Developing Directorate mainly in abroad training.

#My enriched experience in the English language and my knowledge of petroleum expression qualified me to work in the Training and Developing Directorate, mainly in abroad training.

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I attended many training courses in different fields like computers, human resources, and the English language that were held in Baghdad, at the British Council in Amman, and last one was in London at luminous language solution.

#I attended many training courses in different fields like computer, human resources, English language, that held in Baghdad, British Council in Amman, and last one was in London at the luminous language solution.

#I attended many training courses in different fields like computer, human resources, English language that held in Baghdad, the British Council in Amman, and last one was in London at the luminous language solution.

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In spite of that, I did not give up.

# In spite of that, I did not give up.

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It's quite an architecturally important building, I think, plus there are about a million books, so you can learn something new about our culture.

#It's quite an architecturally significant building I think, plus there are about million books, so you can learn something new about our culture.

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There is a pub called Richard's. You can easily find it because it's a huge green building just next to the library.

# There is a pub called Richard's. You can easily find it because it's a huge green building next to the library.

# There is a pub called Richard's. You can easily find it because it's a huge green building just next to the library.

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There you can taste our national cuisine, but their international cuisine is also tasty.

# There you can taste our national cuisine, and our international cuisine is tasty.

What you can taste is our national cuisine, and our international cuisine is tasty.

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Just do not order the pancakes because they make really bad pancakes.

#Just do not order the pancakes, because they are really bad pancakes.

#Just do not order pancakes because they are really bad pancakes.

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If I were you, I would order the shots of alcohol because there is a toy train that will deliver the shots to you.

If I were you, I would order the shots of alcohol because there is a toy train which will deliver the shots to you.

If I were you, I would order the shots of alcohol because there is a toy train that will deliver the shots to you.

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In front of the building are enormous reflectors which shine into the darkness.

# In front of the building, are enormous reflectors which shine into the darkness.

The building is enormous reflectors, which shine into the darkness.

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Not far from the town lies the zoo.

#Not far from the town lies a zoo.

The zoo is not far from the town.

#Not far from the town, lies the zoo.

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This is because people who have a good sense of humor can bring joy to others.

#This is because people who have a good sense of humor can bring joy to others.

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Also, people can have a good relationship when they have a good sense of humor.

#Also, people could have a good relationship when they have a good sense of humor.

# Also, people could have a good relationship when they have a good sense of humor.

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First, people who have a good sense of humor can make others laugh.

# First, people who have a good sense of humor can make others laugh.

2

We like to talk to her because she can always bring us happiness.

The people like to talk to her because she always brings happiness to us.

# We like to talk to her because she always brings happiness to us.

What we like to talk to her because she always brings happiness to us.

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To sum up, people who have a good sense of humor can bring people happiness.

#To sum up, people who have a good sense of humor can bring happiness to people.

# To sum up, people who have a good sense of humor can bring happiness to people.

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In the trend of globalization today, the success or failure of a business depends on many different factors.

# In the trend of globalization today, the success or failure of the business depends on many various factors.

# In the trend of globalization today, the success or failure of a business depends on many different factors.

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In addition, good products with reasonable prices will always attract the attention of customers.

#Besides, good products with reasonable prices will always attract the attention of customers.

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In ancient times, every child loved to play games outside their homes, and they were stronger than children in today's world.

The ancient times, every child loved to play games outside their homes, and they were more strong than children in today's world.

#In ancient times, every child loved to play games outside their homes, and they were stronger than children in today's world.

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There are many games that children can play, like cricket, badminton, football, etc.

# There are many games that children can play like cricket, badminton, football, etc.

# There are many games that children can play, like cricket, badminton, football, etc.

# There are many games that children can play like cricket, badminton, football, etc.

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Our world's great scientists have invented the internet to solve various distant problems.

# Our world's great scientist has invented the internet to solve various distant problems.

The world's great scientist has invented the internet to solve various distant problems.

#Our world's great scientist has invented the internet to solve various distant problems.

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Using the internet in the wrong way may affect their studies and health as well.

#Using the internet in the wrong manner may affect their studies and health as well.

The internet in the wrong way may affect their studies and health as well.

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By playing physical games, they will not only improve their health, but they can also gain concentration.

#By playing physical games, they will not only improve their health but can also gain concentration.

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They should try to understand the importance of physical games and also play them regularly.

# They should try to understand the importance of physical games and also play them regularly.

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Also, I'm a good cook; at one school I taught at, we made cheese and pepperoni pizzas!

#Also, I'm a good cook; at one school, I'd taught at we made cheese and pepperoni pizzas!

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I am always punctual. I'll be good at preparing all the events as I am, as I already told you, organized.

#I am always punctual. I'll be good at preparing all the events as I am- as I already told you- organized.

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Finally, to conclude my letter, I just want to say: Please choose me!

#Finally, to conclude my letter, I just want to say: Please choose me!

# finally, to conclude my letter, I just want to say: Please choose me!

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I will make summer camp a much better place to be!

#I will make summer camp a much better place to be in!

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If I can say, the beaches on those islands are more beautiful and natural than those in Java.

# If I can say, beaches in those islands are more beautiful and natural than in Java island.

The beaches in those islands are more beautiful and natural than in Java island.

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If you choose to travel by plane from Jakarta to Bali, the trip will be much shorter, taking only two hours.

# If you choose to travel by plane from Jakarta to Bali, the trip will be much shorter, spending only two hours.

#If you choose to travel by plane from Jakarta to Bali, the trip will be much shorter, spending only two hours.

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Also, you can interact for longer with other passengers, especially native Indonesians, just in case you need to find out more about Indonesia as you would like to get a temporary job here.

Also, you can interact longer with other passengers, especially native Indonesians, just in case you need to explore more about Indonesia as you would like to get a temporary job here.

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Indonesian people are famous for their friendliness, so you could start a conversation with them to ask anything about Indonesia; they will answer your questions with pleasure.

Indonesian people are famous with their friendliness, so you could start a conversation with them to ask anything about Indonesia; they will answer your questions with pleasure.

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If you like hiking, you could explore the mountains in Java: Semeru, Ranu Kumbolo, Bromo, etc.

# If you like hiking, you could explore mountains in Java: Semeru, Ranu Kumbolo, Bromo, etc.

#If you like hiking, you could explore mountains in Java: Semeru, Ranu Kumbolo, Bromo, etc.

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It can be a little bit difficult to find a temporary job here unless you have got any connections with agencies or local people.

#It can be a little bit difficult to find a temporal job here, unless you got any connections with agency or local people.

The little bit of difficulty in finding a temporal job here, unless you got any connections with agency or local people.

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If in the past, they just held weddings at home to save money, now they tend to choose restaurants and hotels instead.

# If in the past, they just held weddings at home to save money, now they tend to choose restaurants and hotels instead.

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Those who have lost contact for a long time can exchange current information and keep in touch again.

#Those who lose contact for a long time can exchange current information and keep in touch again.

The ones who lose contact for a long time can exchange current information and keep in touch again.

#Those who lose contact for a long time can exchange current information and keep in touch again.

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Instead of that, this amount of money could help the couple buy a house or car for their new life.

# Instead of that, this amount of money can help the couple buy a house or car for a new life.

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At first, when the ski lift rose up to the station, I was terrified, as I was suspended above the ground.

#At first, when the ski lift rose up to the station, I was terrified as I was suspended from the ground.

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Another thing is that I would improve my skills in working with children, and I would find the money useful to expand my academic qualifications.

#Another thing is that: I would improve my skills in working with children and I find the money useful to expand my academic qualifications.

#Another thing is that: I would improve my skills in working with children, and I find the money useful to expand my academic qualifications.

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I believe this job would suit me for the following reasons: I am familiar with the environment in summer camps as I spent my previous summer in one.

I believe this job would suit me for the following reasons: I am familiarized with the environment in summer camps as I spent my previous summer in one.

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All in all, I can assure you that I would be a great addition to your team of workers for all the reasons stated above.

#All in all, I can assure you that I would be a great addition to your team of workers for all the reasons stated above.

# All in all, I can assure you that I would be a great addition to your team of workers for all the reasons mentioned above.

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When I went to class, there was a group of students who had already studied together for some time.

#When I went to class, there was a group of students who had already studied together for some time.

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I needed practice with speaking so much, so it was just what the doctor ordered!

#I was needed practice in speaking so much, so it was what the doctor ordered!

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But when the dinner started, there was nothing to worry about because my classmates appeared supportive and patient.

The dinner started when the dinner started, and there was nothing to worry about because my classmates appeared supportive and patient.

#But when the dinner started, there was nothing to worry about because my classmates appeared supportive and patient.

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The guy who invited me, Francois from France, spoke with me more than the others.

# Guy who invited me, Francois from France, spoke with me more than others.

The guy who invited me, Francois from France, spoke with me more than others.

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Starting to spend every evening together, we spoke about the past, and expressed our thoughts and future plans.

The beginning of the evening, we started to spend every evening together, we spoke about past, expressed our thoughts and future plans.

The starting to spend every evening together, we spoke about past, expressed our thoughts and future plans.

The beginning to spend every evening together, we spoke about past, expressed our thoughts and future plans.

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After two weeks, he returned to France, but we keep in touch even today.

# After two weeks, he returned to France, but we keep in touch even today.

The following two weeks, he returned to France, but we keep in touch even today.

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Do you remember that I went to the Muse concert in Dublin last month?

# Did you remember that I went to the Muse concert in Dublin last month?

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I could see the show from my station, but the most exciting thing happened at the end of the show.

#I could see the show from my place, but the most exciting thing happened at the end of the show.

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The increase in fuel cost, for example, will surely have a negative impact on the use of private vehicles.

#The increase in fuel cost for example, will surely have a negative impact on the use of private vehicles.

The increase in the fuel cost for example, will surely have a negative impact on the use of private vehicles.

# The increase in fuel cost for example, will surely have a negative impact on the use of private vehicles.

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Obviously, the quality of public transport has to be improved.

#Obviously, the quality of public transport has to be improved.

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The latest research carried out by The Health Department in Spain shows that young people are not as healthy as twenty years ago.

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That could be a bigger problem if the trend is maintained for a long time because public spending could rise by 60% in the next 10 years.

# That could be a higher problem if the trend is maintained for a long time because public spending could raise 60% in the next 10 years.

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Finally, it is proved that youths are devoting less time to doing exercise than they should and, as a consequence, they are not improving their general health enough.

# finally, it is proven that youths are devoting less time to do exercise than they should, and as a consequence, they are not improving their general health enough.

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As far as I am concerned, I think the Spanish government should implement health programs and advertising campaigns in order to improve the health of the young population.

#As far as I am concerned, I think the Spanish government should implement health programs and advertisements campaigns in order to improve health in the young population.

#As far as I am concerned, I think the Spanish government should implement health programs and advertisement campaigns in order to improve health in the young population.

The Spanish government should implement health programs and advertisements campaigns in order to improve health in the young population.

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Traveling by car is only convenient in a restricted sense, while public transport is more convenient overall.

#Travelling by car is only convenient in a restricted sense, while public transport is overall more convenient.

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What is meant by a restricted sense is that for adults who are healthy and able-bodied, having access to personal transportation is arguably quite attractive.

# What is meant by a restricted sense is that for adults, who are healthy and able bodied, having access to personal transportation is arguably quite attractive.

# What is meant by a restricted sense is that for adults, who are healthy and able to move around, having access to personal transportation is arguably quite attractive.

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Anyways, if you feel that going to your music classes is stressful and you don't have time to do it, try a new sport! Maybe soccer or go running in the mornings, as I said before. Believe me, golf is kinda fun, but you don't exercise as much as you could.

Anyways, if you feel that going to your music classes is stressful and you don't have time to do it, try a new sport! Maybe soccer or go running in the mornings as I said before, believe me, golf is kinda funny, but you don't exercise too much as you could.

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You certainly will learn to fail and win, but the most important thing that you will learn is never to give up.

# You certainly will learn to fail and win, but the most important thing that you will learn is never give up.

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People have had a need for communication since the dawn of time.

# People have had a need for communication since the dawn of time.

The people have had a need for communication since the dawn of time.

# People have had a need for communication since the dawn of time.

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Every human being has a need for socializing, and that is the first reason why I believe we start making friends.

#Every human being has a need for socialising, and that is the first reason why I believe we start making friends.

#every human being has a need for socialising, and that is the first reason why I believe we start making friends.

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Personally, I usually get on with people pretty well and make new friends easily as I am a natural extrovert (or so I think).

#Personally, I usually get on with people pretty well and make new friends easily as I am a natural extrovert (or so I think).

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A true friendship forms itself on a foundation of strong mutual understanding, and this takes a good deal of time.

#A true friendship forms on a basis of strong mutual understanding and this takes a good deal of time.

The true friendship itself forms on a basis of strong mutual understanding, and this takes a good deal of time.

#A true friendship itself forms on a basis of strong mutual understanding and this takes a good deal of time.

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I thought that he must have called reception for some wine, as the waitress said that every night after he had eaten, he always drank a glass of wine.

#I thought that he must have called the reception for some wine, as the waitress said that every night after he had eaten, he always drank a glass of wine.

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